Update asn1 documentation

Language cleaned up by the technical writer xsipewe from Combitech.
Proofreading and and additional corrections by Björn Gustavsson
and Dan Gudmundsson.

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap8.xml b/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap8.xml
index d35dd0c539..55309177b1 100644
--- a/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap8.xml
+++ b/lib/mnesia/doc/src/Mnesia_chap8.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     
     </legalnotice>
 
-    <title>Combining Mnesia with SNMP</title>
+    <title>Combine Mnesia with SNMP</title>
     <prepared>Claes Wikstr&ouml;m, Hans Nilsson and H&aring;kan Mattsson</prepared>
     <responsible></responsible>
     <docno></docno>
@@ -33,32 +33,29 @@
   </header>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Combining Mnesia and SNMP </title>
+    <title>Combine Mnesia and SNMP</title>
     <p>Many telecommunications applications must be controlled and
       reconfigured remotely. It is sometimes an advantage to perform
       this remote control with an open protocol such as the Simple
       Network Management Protocol (SNMP). The alternatives to this would
-      be:  
-      </p>
+      be the following:</p>
     <list type="bulleted">
-      <item>Not being able to control the application remotely at all.
+      <item>Not being able to control the application remotely
       </item>
-      <item>Using a proprietary control protocol.
+      <item>Using a proprietary control protocol
       </item>
-      <item>Using a bridge which maps control messages in a
+      <item>Using a bridge that maps control messages in a
        proprietary protocol to a standardized management protocol and
-       vice versa. 
+       conversely
       </item>
     </list>
-    <p>All of these approaches have different advantages and
-      disadvantages. Mnesia applications can easily be opened to the
-      SNMP protocol. It is possible to establish a direct one-to-one
-      mapping between Mnesia tables and SNMP tables. This
-      means that a Mnesia table can be configured to be <em>both</em>
-      a Mnesia table and an SNMP table. A number of functions to
-      control this behavior are described in the Mnesia reference
-      manual. 
-      </p>
+    <p>All these approaches have different advantages and
+      disadvantages. <c>Mnesia</c> applications can easily be opened to
+      the SNMP protocol. A direct 1-to-1 mapping can be established
+      between <c>Mnesia</c> tables and SNMP tables. This means
+      that a <c>Mnesia</c> table can be configured to be <em>both</em>
+      a <c>Mnesia</c> table and an SNMP table. A number of functions to
+      control this behavior are described in the Reference Manual.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>