From 606e660f898264ea75680532c076c56bbe855633 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lukas Larsson <lukas@erlang.org>
Date: Fri, 1 Jul 2016 17:32:51 +0200
Subject: erts: Review of documentation changes

---
 erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml | 24 +++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

(limited to 'erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml')

diff --git a/erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml b/erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml
index f143be87d6..d55ab222a7 100644
--- a/erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml
+++ b/erts/doc/src/crash_dump.xml
@@ -37,11 +37,9 @@
 
   <note>
     <p>The Erlang crash dump had a major facelift in Erlang/OTP R9C. The
-      information
-      in this section is therefore not directly applicable for older dumps.
-      However, if you use the <seealso marker="observer:crashdump_viewer">
-      <c>crashdump_viewer</c></seealso> tool in the <c>Observer</c> application
-      on older dumps,
+      information in this section is therefore not directly applicable for
+      older dumps. However, if you use <seealso marker="observer:crashdump_viewer">
+      <c>observer:crashdump_viewer(3)</c></seealso> on older dumps,
       the crash dumps are translated into a format similar to this.</p>
   </note>
 
@@ -94,8 +92,7 @@
       <pre>
 Slogan: &lt;reason&gt;</pre>
 
-      <p>(The word "slogan" has historical roots.)
-        If the system is halted by the BIF
+      <p>If the system is halted by the BIF
         <c><![CDATA[erlang:halt/1]]></c>, the slogan is the string parameter
         passed to the BIF, otherwise it is a description generated by
         the emulator or the (Erlang) kernel. Normally the message
@@ -221,7 +218,7 @@ Slogan: &lt;reason&gt;</pre>
     <title>Scheduler Information</title>
     <p>Under the tag <em>=scheduler</em> is shown information about the current
       state and statistics of the schedulers in the runtime system. On
-      operating systems that allow instant suspension of other threads, the
+      operating systems that allow suspension of other threads, the
       data within this section reflects what the runtime system looks like
       when a crash occurs.</p>
 
@@ -438,13 +435,6 @@ Slogan: &lt;reason&gt;</pre>
         <p>The amount of unused memory on each heap. This information is
           usually useless.</p>
       </item>
-      <tag><em>Stack</em></tag>
-      <item>
-        <p>If the system uses shared heap, the fields
-          <em>Stack+heap</em>, <em>OldHeap</em>, <em>Heap unused</em>,
-          and <em>OldHeap unused</em> do not exist. Instead this field
-          shows the size of the process stack.</p>
-      </item>
       <tag><em>Memory</em></tag>
       <item>
         <p>The total memory used by this process. This includes call stack,
@@ -532,8 +522,8 @@ Slogan: &lt;reason&gt;</pre>
       <tag><em>Fixed</em></tag>
       <item>
         <p>If the table is fixed using
-          <seealso marker="stdlib:ets#ets:safe_fixtable">
-          <c>ets:safe_fixtable</c></seealso> or some internal mechanism.</p>
+          <seealso marker="stdlib:ets#safe_fixtable/2">
+          <c>ets:safe_fixtable/2</c></seealso> or some internal mechanism.</p>
       </item>
       <tag><em>Objects</em></tag>
       <item>
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