From b2f3b6b3b254015e0fd6540353b22ccb3df71bf7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tuncer Ayaz
Date: Tue, 1 Feb 2011 22:25:53 +0100
Subject: erts: Fix doc typos, duplication and readability
---
erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml | 94 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
1 file changed, 43 insertions(+), 51 deletions(-)
(limited to 'erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml')
diff --git a/erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml b/erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml
index 497a2fa01d..066a2a4b92 100644
--- a/erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml
+++ b/erts/doc/src/erl_driver.xml
@@ -56,16 +56,16 @@
instance is connected to an Erlang port. Every port has a port
owner process. Communication with the port is normally done
through the port owner process.
- Most of the functions takes the port handle as an
+
Most of the functions take the port handle as an
argument. This identifies the driver instance. Note that this
port handle must be stored by the driver, it is not given when
the driver is called from the emulator (see
driver_entry).
- Some of the functions takes a parameter of type
+
Some of the functions take a parameter of type
ErlDrvBinary, a driver binary. It should be both
- allocated and freed by the caller. Using a binary directly avoid
+ allocated and freed by the caller. Using a binary directly avoids
one extra copying of data.
- Many of the output functions has a "header buffer", with
+
Many of the output functions have a "header buffer", with
hbuf and hlen parameters. This buffer is sent as a
list before the binary (or list, depending on port mode) that is
sent. This is convenient when matching on messages received from
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
with SMP support without being rewritten if driver
level locking is used.
- It is assumed that drivers does not access other drivers. If
+
It is assumed that drivers do not access other drivers. If
drivers should access each other they have to provide their own
mechanism for thread safe synchronization. Such "inter driver
communication" is strongly discouraged.
@@ -113,12 +113,12 @@
call-backs may be made from different threads.
Most functions in this API are not thread-safe, i.e.,
- they may not be called from an arbitrary thread. Function
+ they may not be called from an arbitrary thread. Functions
that are not documented as thread-safe may only be called from
driver call-backs or function calls descending from a driver
call-back call. Note that driver call-backs may be called from
different threads. This, however, is not a problem for any
- functions in this API, since the emulator have control over
+ function in this API, since the emulator has control over
these threads.
Functions not explicitly documented as thread-safe are
@@ -155,10 +155,10 @@
more information.
Output functions
- - With the output functions, the driver sends data back
+
- With the output functions, the driver sends data back to
the emulator. They will be received as messages by the port owner
process, see open_port/2. The vector function and the
- function taking a driver binary is faster, because that avoid
+ function taking a driver binary are faster, because they avoid
copying the data buffer. There is also a fast way of sending
terms from the driver, without going through the binary term
format.
@@ -193,14 +193,14 @@
use functionality from the POSIX thread API or the Windows
native thread API.
- The Erlang driver thread API only return error codes when it is
+
The Erlang driver thread API only returns error codes when it is
reasonable to recover from an error condition. If it isn't reasonable
to recover from an error condition, the whole runtime system is
terminated. For example, if a create mutex operation fails, an error
code is returned, but if a lock operation on a mutex fails, the
whole runtime system is terminated.
- Note that there exist no "condition variable wait with timeout" in
+
Note that there exists no "condition variable wait with timeout" in
the Erlang driver thread API. This is due to issues with
pthread_cond_timedwait(). When the system clock suddenly
is changed, it isn't always guaranteed that you will wake up from
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
to give you better error reports.
- Adding / remove drivers
+ Adding / removing drivers
- A driver can add and later remove drivers.
Monitoring processes
- A driver can monitor a process that does not own a port.
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
could, under rare circumstances, mean that drivers have to
be slightly modified. If so, this will of course be documented.
ERL_DRV_EXTENDED_MINOR_VERSION will be incremented when
- new features are added. The runtime system use the minor version
+ new features are added. The runtime system uses the minor version
of the driver to determine what features to use.
The runtime system will refuse to load a driver if the major
versions differ, or if the major versions are equal and the
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
It can, however, not make sure that it isn't incompatible. Therefore,
when loading a driver that doesn't use the extended driver
interface, there is a risk that it will be loaded also when
- the driver is incompatible. When the driver use the extended driver
+ the driver is incompatible. When the driver uses the extended driver
interface, the emulator can verify that it isn't of an incompatible
driver version. You are therefore advised to use the extended driver
interface.
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ typedef struct ErlDrvSysInfo {
driver_system_info()
will write the system information when passed a reference to
a ErlDrvSysInfo structure. A description of the
- fields in the structure follow:
+ fields in the structure follows:
driver_major_version
@@ -347,14 +347,6 @@ typedef struct ErlDrvSysInfo {
- A value != 0 if the runtime system has SMP support;
otherwise, 0.
- thread_support
- - A value != 0 if the runtime system has thread support;
- otherwise, 0.
-
- smp_support
- - A value != 0 if the runtime system has SMP support;
- otherwise, 0.
-
async_threads
- The number of async threads in the async thread pool used
by driver_async()
@@ -401,8 +393,8 @@ typedef struct ErlDrvBinary {
driver_binary_dec_refc().
Some driver calls, such as driver_enq_binary,
- increments the driver reference count, and others, such as
- driver_deq decrements it.
+ increment the driver reference count, and others, such as
+ driver_deq decrement it.
Using a driver binary instead of a normal buffer, is often
faster, since the emulator doesn't need to copy the data,
only the pointer is used.
@@ -415,7 +407,7 @@ typedef struct ErlDrvBinary {
driver_outputv calls, and in the queue. Also the
driver call-back outputv uses driver
binaries.
- If the driver of some reason or another, wants to keep a
+
If the driver for some reason or another, wants to keep a
driver binary around, in a static variable for instance, the
reference count should be incremented,
and the binary can later be freed in the stop call-back, with
@@ -423,7 +415,7 @@ typedef struct ErlDrvBinary {
Note that since a driver binary is shared by the driver and
the emulator, a binary received from the emulator or sent to
the emulator, must not be changed by the driver.
- From erts version 5.5 (OTP release R11B), orig_bytes is
+
Since erts version 5.5 (OTP release R11B), orig_bytes is
guaranteed to be properly aligned for storage of an array of
doubles (usually 8-byte aligned).
@@ -447,7 +439,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
int vsize;
int size;
SysIOVec* iov;
- >ErlDrvBinary** binv;
+ ErlDrvBinary** binv;
} ErlIOVec;
The I/O vector used by the emulator and drivers, is a list
@@ -495,17 +487,17 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
Currently, the only port specific data that the emulator
associates with the port data lock is the driver queue.
Normally a driver instance does not have a port data lock. If
- the driver instance want to use a port data lock, it has to
+ the driver instance wants to use a port data lock, it has to
create the port data lock by calling
driver_pdl_create().
NOTE: Once the port data lock has been created, every
- access to data associated with the port data lock have to be done
+ access to data associated with the port data lock has to be done
while having the port data lock locked. The port data lock is
locked, and unlocked, respectively, by use of
driver_pdl_lock(), and
driver_pdl_unlock().
A port data lock is reference counted, and when the reference
- count reach zero, it will be destroyed. The emulator will at
+ count reaches zero, it will be destroyed. The emulator will at
least increment the reference count once when the lock is
created and decrement it once when the port associated with
the lock terminates. The emulator will also increment the
@@ -545,7 +537,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
suggested_stack_size
- - A suggestion, in kilo-words, on how large stack to use. A value less
+
- A suggestion, in kilo-words, on how large a stack to use. A value less
than zero means default size.
@@ -648,7 +640,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
opened.
The data is queued in the port owner process' message
queue. Note that this does not yield to the emulator. (Since
- the driver and the emulator runs in the same thread.)
+ the driver and the emulator run in the same thread.)
The parameter buf points to the data to send, and
len is the number of bytes.
The return value for all output functions is 0. (Unless the
@@ -749,7 +741,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
function timeout is called.
Note that there is only one timer on each driver instance;
setting a new timer will replace an older one.
- Return value i 0 (-1 only when the timeout driver
+
Return value is 0 (-1 only when the timeout driver
function is NULL).
@@ -799,20 +791,20 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
event object must be a socket or pipe (or other object that
select/poll can use).
On windows, the Win32 API function WaitForMultipleObjects
- is used. This places other restriction on the event object.
+ is used. This places other restrictions on the event object.
Refer to the Win32 SDK documentation.
The on parameter should be 1 for setting events
and 0 for clearing them.
- The mode argument is bitwise-or combination of
+
The mode argument is a bitwise-or combination of
ERL_DRV_READ, ERL_DRV_WRITE and ERL_DRV_USE.
- The first two specifies whether to wait for read events and/or write
+ The first two specify whether to wait for read events and/or write
events. A fired read event will call
ready_input
while a fired write event will call
ready_output.
- Some OS (Windows) does not differ between read and write events.
+
Some OS (Windows) do not differentiate between read and write events.
The call-back for a fired event then only depends on the value of mode.
ERL_DRV_USE specifies if we are using the event object or if we want to close it.
@@ -834,9 +826,9 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
as before. But it is recommended to update them to use ERL_DRV_USE and
stop_select to make sure that event objects are closed in a safe way.
- The return value is 0 (Failure, -1, only if the
+
The return value is 0 (failure, -1, only if the
ready_input/ready_output is
- NULL.
+ NULL).
@@ -1076,7 +1068,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
array of SysIOVecs. It also returns the number of
elements in vlen. This is the only way to get data
out of the queue.
- Nothing is remove from the queue by this function, that must be done
+
Nothing is removed from the queue by this function, that must be done
with driver_deq.
The returned array is suitable to use with the Unix system
call writev.
@@ -1209,7 +1201,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
Stop monitoring a process from a driver
- This function cancels an monitor created earlier.
+ This function cancels a monitor created earlier.
The function returns 0 if a monitor was removed and > 0
if the monitor did no longer exist.
@@ -1326,7 +1318,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
This function signals to erlang that the driver has
encountered an EOF and should be closed, unless the port was
opened with the eof option, in that case eof is sent
- to the port. Otherwise, the port is close and an
+ to the port. Otherwise, the port is closed and an
'EXIT' message is sent to the port owner process.
The return value is 0.
@@ -1349,8 +1341,8 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
(driver_failure).
The driver should fail only when in severe error situations,
when the driver cannot possibly keep open, for instance
- buffer allocation gets out of memory. Normal errors is more
- appropriate to handle with sending error codes with
+ buffer allocation gets out of memory. For normal errors
+ it is more appropriate to send error codes with
driver_output.
The return value is 0.
@@ -1371,7 +1363,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
This function returns the process id of the process that
made the current call to the driver. The process id can be
used with driver_send_term to send back data to the
- caller. driver_caller() only return valid data
+ caller. driver_caller() only returns valid data
when currently executing in one of the following driver
callbacks:
@@ -1409,7 +1401,7 @@ typedef struct ErlIOVec {
tuple, the elements are given first, and then the tuple
term, with a count. Likewise for lists.
A tuple must be specified with the number of elements. (The
- elements precedes the ERL_DRV_TUPLE term.)
+ elements precede the ERL_DRV_TUPLE term.)
A list must be specified with the number of elements,
including the tail, which is the last term preceding
ERL_DRV_LIST.
@@ -1518,7 +1510,7 @@ ERL_DRV_EXT2TERM char *buf, ErlDrvUInt len
};
driver_output_term(port, spec, sizeof(spec) / sizeof(spec[0]));
]]>
- If you want to pass a binary and doesn't already have the content
+
If you want to pass a binary and don't already have the content
of the binary in an ErlDrvBinary, you can benefit from using
ERL_DRV_BUF2BINARY instead of creating an ErlDrvBinary
via driver_alloc_binary() and then pass the binary via
@@ -1565,7 +1557,7 @@ ERL_DRV_EXT2TERM char *buf, ErlDrvUInt len
other processes than the port owner process. The
receiver parameter specifies the process to receive
the data.
- The parameters term and n does the same thing
+
The parameters term and n do the same thing
as in driver_output_term.
This function is only thread-safe when the emulator with SMP
support is used.
@@ -1660,7 +1652,7 @@ ERL_DRV_EXT2TERM char *buf, ErlDrvUInt len
This function locks the driver used by the port port
- in memory for the rest of the emulator process
+ in memory for the rest of the emulator process'
lifetime. After this call, the driver behaves as one of Erlang's
statically linked in drivers.
@@ -1904,7 +1896,7 @@ ERL_DRV_EXT2TERM char *buf, ErlDrvUInt len
corresponding to one of the involved thread identifiers
has terminated since the thread identifier was saved,
the result of erl_drv_equal_tids() might not give
- expected result.
+ the expected result.
This function is thread-safe.
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