From 57c3246511434f42214e113b8902af10ab9cca49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: xsipewe <par.wennstad@combitech.se>
Date: Tue, 21 Jun 2016 15:50:34 +0200
Subject: erts: Editorial changes

---
 erts/doc/src/start.xml | 36 ++++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'erts/doc/src/start.xml')

diff --git a/erts/doc/src/start.xml b/erts/doc/src/start.xml
index adacf5b98d..6eac47fe94 100644
--- a/erts/doc/src/start.xml
+++ b/erts/doc/src/start.xml
@@ -28,38 +28,46 @@
     <docno></docno>
     <approved></approved>
     <checked></checked>
-    <date>99-12-15</date>
+    <date>1999-12-15</date>
     <rev></rev>
     <file>start.xml</file>
   </header>
   <com>start</com>
-  <comsummary>OTP start script example for Unix</comsummary>
+  <comsummary>OTP start script example for Unix.</comsummary>
   <description>
-    <p>This describes the <c><![CDATA[start]]></c> script that is an example script on
-      how to startup the Erlang system in embedded mode on Unix.</p>
-    <p>You can read more about the use in the <c><![CDATA[Embedded System User's Guide]]></c>.</p>
+    <p>The <c><![CDATA[start]]></c> script is an example script on
+      how to start up the Erlang system in embedded mode on Unix.</p>
+
+    <p>For more information about the use, see the
+      <seealso marker="doc/embedded:embedded_solaris">
+      Embedded System User's Guide</seealso> in System Documentation.</p>
   </description>
+
   <funcs>
     <func>
       <name>start [ data_file ]</name>
-      <fsummary>This is an example script on how to startup the Erlang system in embedded mode on Unix.</fsummary>
+      <fsummary>Example script on how to start up the Erlang system in embedded
+        mode on Unix.</fsummary>
       <desc>
-        <p>In the example there is one argument</p>
+        <p>Argument:</p>
         <taglist>
-          <tag>data_file</tag>
-          <item>Optional, specifies what <c><![CDATA[start_erl.data]]></c> file
-           to use.</item>
+          <tag><c>data_file</c></tag>
+          <item>
+            <p>Optional. Specifies what <c><![CDATA[start_erl.data]]></c> file
+              to use.</p>
+          </item>
         </taglist>
-        <p>There is also an environment variable <c><![CDATA[RELDIR]]></c> that can
-          be set prior to calling this example that set the directory
+        <p>Environment variable <c><![CDATA[RELDIR]]></c> can
+          be set before calling this example, which sets the directory
           where to find the release files.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
   </funcs>
 
   <section>
-    <title>SEE ALSO</title>
-    <p>run_erl(1), start_erl(1)</p>
+    <title>See Also</title>
+    <p><seealso marker="run_erl"><c>run_erl(1)</c></seealso>,
+      <seealso marker="start_erl"><c>start_erl(1)</c></seealso></p>
   </section>
 </comref>
 
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