From e5ecd0d0924af44aaed9f59f61ef8430c8e1f355 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Derek Brown
Date: Mon, 21 Jul 2014 15:15:40 -0400
Subject: Fix minor grammatical errors in epmd docs
Small grammar changes.
---
erts/doc/src/epmd.xml | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
(limited to 'erts/doc')
diff --git a/erts/doc/src/epmd.xml b/erts/doc/src/epmd.xml
index 963d35c3c8..25f819ab50 100644
--- a/erts/doc/src/epmd.xml
+++ b/erts/doc/src/epmd.xml
@@ -58,12 +58,12 @@
of the IP address and a port number. The name of the node is
an atom on the form of .
The job of the daemon is to keep track of which
- node name listens on which address. Hence, map
+ node name listens on which address. Hence, maps
symbolic node names to machine addresses.
The TCP/IP epmd daemon actually only keeps track of
- the Name (first) part of an Erlang node name, the Host
- part (whatever is after the is implicit in the
+ the Name (first) part of an Erlang node name. The Host
+ part (whatever is after the ) is implicit in the
node name where the epmd daemon was actually contacted,
as is the IP address where the Erlang node can be
reached. Consistent and correct TCP naming services are
@@ -77,12 +77,12 @@
The daemon is started automatically by the erl
command if the node is to be distributed and there is no
running instance present. If automatically launched,
- environment variables has to be used to alter the behavior of
+ environment variables have to be used to alter the behavior of
the daemon. See the Environment
variables section below.
- If the -daemon argument is not given, the
+
If the -daemon argument is not given,
runs as a normal program with the
controlling terminal of the shell in which it is
started. Normally, it should run as a daemon.
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
comma-separated list of IP addresses and on the loopback address
(which is implicitly added to the list if it has not been
specified). This can also be set using the
- environment variable, see the
+ environment variable. See the
section Environment
variables below.
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@
-
Let this instance of epmd listen to another TCP port than
default 4369. This can also be set using the
- environment variable, see the
+ environment variable. See the
section Environment
variables below
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
With relaxed command checking, the epmd daemon can be killed from the localhost with i.e. epmd -kill even if there are active nodes registered. Normally only daemons with an empty node database can be killed with the epmd -kill command.
-
-
The epmd -stop command (and the corresponding messages to epmd, as can be given using erl_interface/ei) is normally always ignored, as it opens up for strange situation when two nodes of the same name can be alive at the same time. A node unregisters itself by just closing the connection to epmd, why the stop command was only intended for use in debugging situations.
+ The epmd -stop command (and the corresponding messages to epmd, as can be given using erl_interface/ei) is normally always ignored, as it opens up the possibility of a strange situation where two nodes of the same name can be alive at the same time. A node unregisters itself by just closing the connection to epmd, which is why the stop command was only intended for use in debugging situations.
With relaxed command checking enabled, you can forcibly unregister live nodes.
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
DbgExtra options
- These options are purely for debugging and testing epmd clients, they should not be used in normal operation.
+ These options are purely for debugging and testing epmd clients. They should not be used in normal operation.
@@ -177,9 +177,9 @@
-
-
To simulate a busy server you can insert a delay between epmd
- gets notified about that a new connection is requested and
- when the connections gets accepted.
+ To simulate a busy server you can insert a delay between when epmd
+ gets notified that a new connection is requested and
+ when the connection gets accepted.
-
@@ -191,15 +191,15 @@
Interactive options
-
These options make epmd run as an interactive command displaying the results of sending queries ta an already running instance of epmd. The epmd contacted is always on the local node, but the -port option can be used to select between instances if several are running using different port on the host.
+ These options make epmd run as an interactive command, displaying the results of sending queries to an already running instance of epmd. The epmd contacted is always on the local node, but the -port option can be used to select between instances if several are running using different ports on the host.
-
Contacts the epmd listening on the given TCP port number
(default 4369). This can also be set using the
- environment variable, see the
+ environment variable. See the
section Environment
- variables below
+ variables below.
-
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
Kill the currently running epmd.
Killing the running epmd is only allowed if epmd
- -names show an empty database or
+ -names shows an empty database or
-relaxed_command_check was given when the running
instance of epmd was started. Note that
-relaxed_command_check is given when starting the
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
This command can only be used when contacting epmd
instances started with the -relaxed_command_check
flag. Note that relaxed command checking has to be enabled for
- the epmd daemon contacted, When running epmd
+ the epmd daemon contacted. When running epmd
interactively,
-relaxed_command_check has no effect.
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@
-
If set prior to start, the epmd daemon will behave
as if the -relaxed_command_check option was given at
- start-up. If consequently setting this option before starting
+ start-up. Consequently, if this option is set before starting
the Erlang virtual machine, the automatically started
epmd will accept the -kill and -stop
commands without restrictions.
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@
remote hosts. However, only the query commands are answered (and
acted upon) if the query comes from a remote host. It is always an
error to try to register a nodename if the client is not a process
- located on the same host as the epmd instance is running on,
- why such requests are considered hostile and the connection is
+ located on the same host as the epmd instance is running on-
+ such requests are considered hostile and the connection is
immediately closed.
The queries accepted from remote nodes are:
@@ -307,3 +307,4 @@
+
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