From 031f9ca91ade7fbb9e31c82545401b8a5531e539 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: xsipewe <par.wennstad@combitech.se>
Date: Thu, 20 Oct 2016 11:46:03 +0200
Subject: erl_interface: Editorial changes

---
 lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml | 122 +++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 67 insertions(+), 55 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml')

diff --git a/lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml b/lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml
index 69f303722d..fa565ba56c 100644
--- a/lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml
+++ b/lib/erl_interface/doc/src/erl_global.xml
@@ -28,91 +28,100 @@
     <docno></docno>
     <approved>Gordon Beaton</approved>
     <checked>Gordon Beaton</checked>
-    <date>980703</date>
+    <date>1998-07-03</date>
     <rev>A</rev>
     <file>erl_global.xml</file>
   </header>
   <lib>erl_global</lib>
-  <libsummary>Access globally registered names</libsummary>
+  <libsummary>Access globally registered names.</libsummary>
   <description>
     <p>This module provides support for registering, looking
-      up and unregistering names in the Erlang Global module. For more
-      information, see the description of Global in the reference manual.</p>
-    <p>Note that the functions below perform an RPC using an open file
+      up, and unregistering names in the <c>global</c> module.
+      For more information, see
+      <seealso marker="kernel:global"><c>kernel:global</c></seealso>.</p>
+
+    <p>Notice that the functions below perform an RPC using an open file
       descriptor provided by the caller. This file descriptor must
-      not be used for other traffic during the global operation or the
-      function may receive unexpected data and fail.</p>
+      not be used for other traffic during the global operation, as the
+      function can then receive unexpected data and fail.</p>
   </description>
+
   <funcs>
     <func>
       <name><ret>char **</ret><nametext>erl_global_names(fd,count)</nametext></name>
-      <fsummary>Obtain list of Global names.</fsummary>
+      <fsummary>Obtain list of global names.</fsummary>
+      <marker id="erl_global_names"/>
       <type>
         <v>int fd;</v>
         <v>int *count;</v>
       </type>
       <desc>
-        <p>Retrieve a list of all known global names.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang connection.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is the address of an integer, or NULL. If
-          <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is not NULL, it will be set by the function to
-          the number of names found.
-          </p>
+        <p>Retrieves a list of all known global names.</p>
+        <list type="bulleted">
+          <item><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang
+            connection.</item>
+          <item><c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is the address of an integer, or
+            <c>NULL</c>. If <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is not <c>NULL</c>, it is
+            set by the function to the number of names found.</item>
+        </list>
         <p>On success, the function returns an array of strings, each
-          containing a single registered name, and sets <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> to
+          containing a single registered name, and sets
+          <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> to
           the number of names found. The array is terminated
-          by a single NULL pointer. On failure, the function returns
-          NULL and <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is not modified.
-          </p>
+          by a single <c>NULL</c> pointer. On failure, the function returns
+          <c>NULL</c> and <c><![CDATA[count]]></c> is not modified.</p>
         <note>
           <p>It is the caller's responsibility to free the array
             afterwards. It has been allocated by the function with a
-            single call to <c><![CDATA[malloc()]]></c>, so a single <c><![CDATA[free()]]></c> is
-            all that is necessary.</p>
+            single call to <c><![CDATA[malloc()]]></c>, so a single
+            <c><![CDATA[free()]]></c> is all that is necessary.</p>
         </note>
       </desc>
     </func>
+
     <func>
       <name><ret>int</ret><nametext>erl_global_register(fd,name,pid)</nametext></name>
-      <fsummary>Register a name in Global.</fsummary>
+      <fsummary>Register a name in global.</fsummary>
       <type>
         <v>int fd;</v>
         <v>const char *name;</v>
         <v>ETERM *pid;</v>
       </type>
       <desc>
-        <p>This function registers a name in Global.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang connection.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name to register in Global.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[pid]]></c> is the pid that should be associated with
-          <c><![CDATA[name]]></c>. This is the value that Global will return when
-          processes request the location of <c><![CDATA[name]]></c>.
-          </p>
-        <p>The function returns 0 on success, or -1 on failure.</p>
+        <p>Registers a name in <c>global</c>.</p>
+        <list type="bulleted">
+          <item><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang
+            connection.</item>
+          <item><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name to register in
+            <c>global</c>.</item>
+          <item><c><![CDATA[pid]]></c> is the pid that is to be associated with
+            <c><![CDATA[name]]></c>. This value is returned by <c>global</c>
+            when processes request the location of <c><![CDATA[name]]></c>.
+          </item>
+        </list>
+        <p>Returns <c>0</c> on success, otherwise <c>-1</c>.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
+
     <func>
       <name><ret>int</ret><nametext>erl_global_unregister(fd,name)</nametext></name>
-      <fsummary>Unregister a name in Global.</fsummary>
+      <fsummary>Unregister a name from global.</fsummary>
       <type>
         <v>int fd;</v>
         <v>const char *name;</v>
       </type>
       <desc>
-        <p>This function unregisters a name from Global.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang connection.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name to unregister from Global.
-          </p>
-        <p>The function returns 0 on success, or -1 on failure.</p>
+        <p>Unregisters a name from <c>global</c>.</p>
+        <list type="bulleted">
+          <item><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang
+            connection.</item>
+          <item><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name to unregister from
+            <c>global</c>.</item>
+        </list>
+        <p>Returns <c>0</c> on success, otherwise <c>-1</c>.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
+
     <func>
       <name><ret>ETERM *</ret><nametext>erl_global_whereis(fd,name,node)</nametext></name>
       <fsummary>Look up a name in global.</fsummary>
@@ -122,19 +131,22 @@
         <v>char *node;</v>
       </type>
       <desc>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang connection.
-          </p>
-        <p><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name that is to be looked up in Global.
-          </p>
-        <p>If <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> is not NULL, it is a pointer to a buffer
-          where the function can fill in the name of the node where
-          <c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is found. <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> can be passed directly to
-          <c><![CDATA[erl_connect()]]></c> if necessary.
-          </p>
-        <p>On success, the function returns an Erlang Pid containing the address
-          of the given name, and node will be initialized to
-          the nodename where <c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is found. On failure NULL will be
-          returned and <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> will not be modified.</p>
+        <p>Looks up a name in <c>global</c>.</p>
+        <list type="bulleted">
+          <item><c><![CDATA[fd]]></c> is an open descriptor to an Erlang
+            connection.</item>
+          <item><c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is the name that is to be looked up in
+            <c>global</c>.</item>
+        </list>
+        <p>If <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> is not <c>NULL</c>, it is a pointer to a
+          buffer where the function can fill in the name of the node where
+          <c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is found. <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> can be
+          passed directly to <c><![CDATA[erl_connect()]]></c> if necessary.</p>
+        <p>On success, the function returns an Erlang pid containing the address
+          of the specified name, and the node is initialized to
+          the node name where <c><![CDATA[name]]></c> is found. On failure,
+          <c>NULL</c> is returned and <c><![CDATA[node]]></c> is not
+          modified.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
   </funcs>
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