From c54168c72bb42f8ffb0e341fd56cd81a89b53430 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: tmanevik <tommy.manevik@combitech.se>
Date: Fri, 3 Jul 2015 09:34:23 +0200
Subject: Inets User Guide

Editorial Changes
---
 lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml | 53 +++++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml')

diff --git a/lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml b/lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml
index 2f5b8abb5f..84fa064551 100644
--- a/lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml
+++ b/lib/inets/doc/src/ftp_client.xml
@@ -34,38 +34,27 @@
   </header>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Introduction</title>
+    <title>Getting Started</title>
 
-    <p>Ftp clients are consider to be rather temporary and are
-      for that reason only started and stopped during
-      runtime and can not be started at application startup.
-      Due to the design of FTP client API, letting some
-      functions return intermediate results, only the process
-      that started the ftp client will be able to access it in
-      order to preserve sane semantics. (This could be solved
-      by changing the API and using the concept of a controlling
-      process more in line with other OTP applications, but
-      that is perhaps something for the future.) 
-      If the process that started the ftp session 
-      dies the ftp client process will terminate.</p>
+    <p>FTP clients are considered to be rather temporary. Thus, 
+      they are only started and stopped during runtime and cannot 
+      be started at application startup.
+      The FTP client API is designed to allow some functions to 
+      return intermediate results. This implies that only the process
+      that started the FTP client can access it with
+      preserved sane semantics. (This can be solved
+      by changing the API, using the concept of a controlling
+      process as with other OTP applications, but
+      that is something for future releases of <c>Inets</c>.) 
+      If the process that started the FTP session 
+      dies, the FTP client process terminates.</p>
 
-    <p>The client supports ipv6 as long as the underlying mechanisms
-      also do so. </p>
+    <p>The client supports IPv6 as long as the underlying mechanisms
+      also do so.</p>
 
-    </section>
-
-  <section>
-    <title>Using the FTP Client API</title>
-    <p>The following is a simple example of an ftp session, where
+    <p>The following is a simple example of an FTP session, where
       the user <c>guest</c> with password <c>password</c> logs on to
-      the remote host <c>erlang.org</c>, and where the file
-      <c>appl.erl</c> is transferred from the remote to the local
-      host.  When the session is opened, the current directory at
-      the remote host is <c>/home/guest</c>, and <c>/home/fred</c>
-      at the local host. Before transferring the file, the current
-      local directory is changed to <c>/home/eproj/examples</c>, and
-      the remote directory is set to
-      <c>/home/guest/appl/examples</c>.</p>
+      the remote host <c>erlang.org</c>:</p>
     <code type="erl"><![CDATA[
       1> inets:start().
       ok
@@ -86,6 +75,14 @@
       9> inets:stop(ftpc, Pid).
       ok
     ]]></code>
+    <p> The file
+      <c>appl.erl</c> is transferred from the remote to the local
+      host.  When the session is opened, the current directory at
+      the remote host is <c>/home/guest</c>, and <c>/home/fred</c>
+      at the local host. Before transferring the file, the current
+      local directory is changed to <c>/home/eproj/examples</c>, and
+      the remote directory is set to
+      <c>/home/guest/appl/examples</c>.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 
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