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From: =?UTF-8?q?Bj=C3=B6rn=20Gustavsson?= <bjorn@erlang.org>
Date: Tue, 14 Apr 2015 23:21:36 +0200
Subject: Update Kernel documentation
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Language cleaned up by technical writers from Combitech.
Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson and
Hans Bolinder.
---
 lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml | 67 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 34 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml')

diff --git a/lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml b/lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml
index a8015fa453..ac4c97b43a 100644
--- a/lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml
+++ b/lib/kernel/doc/src/erl_boot_server.xml
@@ -29,72 +29,73 @@
     <rev></rev>
   </header>
   <module>erl_boot_server</module>
-  <modulesummary>Boot Server for Other Erlang Machines</modulesummary>
+  <modulesummary>Boot server for other Erlang machines.</modulesummary>
   <description>
-    <p>This server is used to assist diskless Erlang nodes which fetch
+    <p>This server is used to assist diskless Erlang nodes that fetch
       all Erlang code from another machine.</p>
     <p>This server is used to fetch all code, including the start
       script, if an Erlang runtime system is started with
-      the <c>-loader inet</c> command line flag. All hosts specified
-      with the <c>-hosts Host</c> command line flag must have one
+      command-line flag <c>-loader inet</c>. All hosts specified
+      with command-line flag <c>-hosts Host</c> must have one
       instance of this server running.</p>
-    <p>This server can be started with the <c>kernel</c> configuration
+    <p>This server can be started with the <c>Kernel</c> configuration
       parameter <c>start_boot_server</c>.</p>
-    <p>The <c>erl_boot_server</c> can both read regular files as well as
-      files in archives. See <seealso marker="code">code(3)</seealso>
-      and <seealso marker="erts:erl_prim_loader">erl_prim_loader(3)</seealso>.</p>
-    <warning><p>The support for loading of code from archive files is
-     experimental. The sole purpose of releasing it before it is ready
-     is to obtain early feedback. The file format, semantics,
-     interfaces etc. may be changed in a future release.</p></warning>
+    <p>The <c>erl_boot_server</c> can read regular files and
+      files in archives. See <seealso marker="code"><c>code(3)</c></seealso>
+      and
+    <seealso marker="erts:erl_prim_loader"><c>erl_prim_loader(3)</c></seealso>
+    in <c>ERTS</c>.</p>
+    <warning><p>The support for loading code from archive files is
+     experimental. It is released before it is ready
+     to obtain early feedback. The file format, semantics,
+     interfaces, and so on, can be changed in a future release.</p></warning>
   </description>
   <funcs>
     <func>
-      <name name="start" arity="1"/>
-      <fsummary>Start the boot server</fsummary>
+      <name name="add_slave" arity="1"/>
+      <fsummary>Add a slave to the list of allowed slaves.</fsummary>
       <desc>
-        <p>Starts the boot server. <c><anno>Slaves</anno></c> is a list of IP
-          addresses for hosts which are allowed to use this server as a
-          boot server.</p>
+        <p>Adds a <c><anno>Slave</anno></c> node to the list of allowed slave hosts.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
     <func>
-      <name name="start_link" arity="1"/>
-      <fsummary>Start the boot server and links the caller</fsummary>
+      <name name="delete_slave" arity="1"/>
+      <fsummary>Delete a slave from the list of allowed slaves.</fsummary>
       <desc>
-        <p>Starts the boot server and links to the caller. This function
-          is used to start the server if it is included in a supervision
-          tree.</p>
+        <p>Deletes a <c><anno>Slave</anno></c> node from the list of allowed slave
+          hosts.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
     <func>
-      <name name="add_slave" arity="1"/>
-      <fsummary>Add a slave to the list of allowed slaves</fsummary>
+      <name name="start" arity="1"/>
+      <fsummary>Start the boot server.</fsummary>
       <desc>
-        <p>Adds a <c><anno>Slave</anno></c> node to the list of allowed slave hosts.</p>
+        <p>Starts the boot server. <c><anno>Slaves</anno></c> is a list of
+          IP addresses for hosts, which are allowed to use this server as a
+          boot server.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
     <func>
-      <name name="delete_slave" arity="1"/>
-      <fsummary>Delete a slave from the list of allowed slaves</fsummary>
+      <name name="start_link" arity="1"/>
+      <fsummary>Start the boot server and link to the the caller.</fsummary>
       <desc>
-        <p>Deletes a <c><anno>Slave</anno></c> node from the list of allowed slave
-          hosts.</p>
+        <p>Starts the boot server and links to the caller. This function
+          is used to start the server if it is included in a supervision
+          tree.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
     <func>
       <name name="which_slaves" arity="0"/>
-      <fsummary>Return the current list of allowed slave hosts</fsummary>
+      <fsummary>Return the current list of allowed slave hosts.</fsummary>
       <desc>
         <p>Returns the current list of allowed slave hosts.</p>
       </desc>
     </func>
   </funcs>
-
   <section>
     <title>SEE ALSO</title>
-    <p><seealso marker="erts:init">init(3)</seealso>,  
-      <seealso marker="erts:erl_prim_loader">erl_prim_loader(3)</seealso></p>
+    <p><seealso marker="erts:init"><c>erts:init(3)</c></seealso>,
+      <seealso marker="erts:erl_prim_loader"><c>erts:erl_prim_loader(3)</c></seealso></p>
   </section>
 </erlref>
 
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