From a99b7ff68aa194c260134ab2461af1a14a03e697 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: tmanevik <tommy.manevik@combitech.se>
Date: Thu, 23 Apr 2015 15:06:05 +0200
Subject: Editorial changes

---
 lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml | 23 ++++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml')

diff --git a/lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml b/lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml
index bf11a092d8..17f4e5155a 100644
--- a/lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml
+++ b/lib/public_key/doc/src/introduction.xml
@@ -36,27 +36,28 @@
 
   <section>
     <title>Purpose</title>
-    <p> public_key deals with public key related file formats, digital
-    signatures and <url href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5280.txt">
+    <p>The <c>public_key</c> application deals with public-key related file 
+    formats, digital signatures, and <url href="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5280.txt">
     X-509 certificates</url>. It is a library application that
-    provides encode/decode, sign/verify, encrypt/decrypt and similar
-    functionality, it does not read or write files it expects or returns
+    provides encode/decode, sign/verify, encrypt/decrypt, and similar
+    functionality. It does not read or write files, it expects or returns
     file contents or partial file contents as binaries.
     </p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Prerequisites</title>
-    <p>It is assumed that the reader has a basic understanding
-    of the concepts of using public keys and digital certificates.</p>
+    <p>It is assumed that the reader is familiar with the Erlang programming 
+    language and has a basic understanding of the concepts of using public-keys 
+    and digital certificates.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Performance tips</title>
-    <p>The public_key decode and encode functions will try to use the NIFs
-    which are in the ASN1 compilers runtime modules if they can be found.
-    So for the best  performance you want to have the ASN1 application in the
-    path of your system. </p>
+    <title>Performance Tips</title>
+    <p>The <c>public_key</c> decode- and encode-functions try to use the NIFs
+    in the <c>ASN.1</c> compilers runtime modules, if they can be found.
+    Thus, to have the <c>ASN.1</c> application in the
+    path of your system gives the best performance.</p>
   </section>
 
 </chapter>
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