From 82dd592d078c473c93ba5cded74f9d71dc504e30 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Bj=C3=B6rn=20Gustavsson?= <bjorn@erlang.org>
Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 15:35:13 +0100
Subject: Update Embedded Systems User's Guide
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit

Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik
from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson.
---
 system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml | 57 ++++++++++++++++---------------------
 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)

(limited to 'system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml')

diff --git a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
index 530e3663e4..2e3b32eb84 100644
--- a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
+++ b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
@@ -31,54 +31,47 @@
     <rev>PA2</rev>
     <file>embedded_nt.xml</file>
   </header>
-  <p>This chapter describes the OS specific parts of OTP which relate
-    to Windows NT.
-    </p>
+  <marker id="windows nt"></marker>
+  <p>This section describes the operating system-specific parts of OTP
+    that relate to Windows NT.</p>
+  <p>A normal installation of Windows NT 4.0, with Service Pack 4 or
+    later, is required for an embedded Windows NT running OTP.</p>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Introduction</title>
-    <p>A normal installation of NT 4.0, with service pack 4 or later, 
-      is required for an embedded Windows NT running OTP.</p>
+    <title>Memory Use</title>
+    <p>RAM memory of 96 MB is recommended to run OTP on Windows NT.
+      A system with less than 64 MB of RAM is not recommended.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Memory Usage</title>
-    <p>RAM memory of 96 MBytes is recommended to run OTP on NT.
-      A system with less than 64 Mbytes of RAM is not recommended.</p>
+    <title>Disk Space Use</title>
+    <p>A minimum Windows NT installation with networking needs 250 MB,
+      and an extra 130 MB for the swap file.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Disk Space Usage</title>
-    <p>A minimum NT installation with networking needs 250 MB, and 
-      an additional 130 MB for the swap file. </p>
-  </section>
-
-  <section>
-    <title>Installation</title>
-    <p>Normal NT installation is performed. No additional application   
-      programs are needed, such as Internet explorer or web server. Networking
-      with TCP/IP is required.      <br></br>
-
-      Service pack 4 or later must be installed.</p>
+    <title>Installing an Embedded System</title>
+    <p>Normal Windows NT installation is performed. No additional
+      application programs are needed, such as Internet Explorer or
+      web server. Networking with TCP/IP is required.</p>
+    <p>Service Pack 4 or later must be installed.</p>
 
     <section>
       <title>Hardware Watchdog</title>
-      <p>For Windows NT running on standard PCs with ISA and/or PCI bus
-        there is a possibility to install an extension card with a hardware
-        watchdog.
-        </p>
-      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> reference manual page in
-        <em>Kernel</em>.
-        </p>
+      <p>For Windows NT running on standard PCs with ISA and/or PCI bus,
+        an extension card with a hardware watchdog can be installed.</p>
+      <p>For more information, see the <c>heart(3)</c> manual page in
+        <c>kernel</c>.</p>
     </section>
   </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Starting Erlang</title>
-    <p>On an embedded system, the <c>erlsrv</c> module should be used, 
-      to install the erlang process as a Windows system service. 
-      This service can start
-      after NT has booted. See documentation for <c>erlsrv</c>.</p>
+    <p>On an embedded system, the <c>erlsrv</c> module is to be used
+      to install the Erlang process as a Windows system service.
+      This service can start after Windows NT has booted.</p>
+    <p>For more information, see the <c>erlsrv</c> manual page
+      in <c>erts</c>.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 
-- 
cgit v1.2.3