From 2d3ab68c60e8bacf9e0efe403895e7065ef683be Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Hans Bolinder <hasse@erlang.org>
Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 15:35:13 +0100
Subject: Update Interoperability Tutorial

Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik
from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Hans Bolinder.
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 system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc | 21 +++++++++++++++------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc b/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
index f87eb217e9..e205ca189e 100644
--- a/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
+++ b/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <chapter>
   <header>
     <copyright>
-      <year>2000</year><year>2013</year>
+      <year>2000</year><year>2015</year>
       <holder>Ericsson AB. All Rights Reserved.</holder>
     </copyright>
     <legalnotice>
@@ -31,16 +31,25 @@
 
   <section>
     <title>Description</title>
-    <p>A common interoperability situation is when there exists a piece of code solving some complex problem, and we would like to incorporate this piece of code in our Erlang program. Suppose for example we have the following C functions that we would like to be able to call from Erlang.</p>
-    <codeinclude file="complex.c" tag="" type="none"></codeinclude>
-    <p>(For the sake of keeping the example as simple as possible, the functions are not very complicated in this case).</p>
-    <p>Preferably we would like to able to call <c>foo</c> and <c>bar</c> without having to bother about them actually being C functions.</p>
+    <p>A common interoperability situation is when you want to incorporate
+      a piece of code, solving a complex problem, in your Erlang
+      program. Suppose for example, that you have the following C
+      functions that you would like to call from Erlang:</p>
+      <codeinclude file="complex.c" tag="" type="none"></codeinclude>
+    <p>The functions are deliberately kept as simple as possible, for
+      readability reasons.</p>
+    <p>From an Erlang perspektive, it is preferable to be able to call
+      <c>foo</c> and <c>bar</c> without having to bother about that
+      they are C functions:</p>
     <pre>
 % Erlang code
 ...
 Res = complex:foo(X),
 ...</pre>
-    <p>The communication with C is hidden in the implementation of <c>complex.erl</c>. In the following chapters it is shown how this module can be implemented using the different interoperability mechanisms.</p>
+    <p>Here, the communication with C is hidden in the implementation
+      of <c>complex.erl</c>.
+      In the following sections, it is shown how this module can be
+      implemented using the different interoperability mechanisms.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 
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From 738c34d4bb8f1a3811acd00af8c6c12107f8315b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Yinhe <bruce@erlang.org>
Date: Thu, 18 Jun 2015 11:31:02 +0200
Subject: Change license text to APLv2

---
 system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc | 21 +++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

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diff --git a/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc b/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
index e205ca189e..d49c7fe88c 100644
--- a/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
+++ b/system/doc/tutorial/example.xmlsrc
@@ -8,16 +8,17 @@
       <holder>Ericsson AB. All Rights Reserved.</holder>
     </copyright>
     <legalnotice>
-      The contents of this file are subject to the Erlang Public License,
-      Version 1.1, (the "License"); you may not use this file except in
-      compliance with the License. You should have received a copy of the
-      Erlang Public License along with this software. If not, it can be
-      retrieved online at http://www.erlang.org/.
-    
-      Software distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS"
-      basis, WITHOUT WARRANTY OF ANY KIND, either express or implied. See
-      the License for the specific language governing rights and limitations
-      under the License.
+      Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
+      you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
+      You may obtain a copy of the License at
+ 
+          http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+      Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+      distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+      WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+      See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+      limitations under the License.
     
     </legalnotice>
 
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