From a0899e09dc5aede325663a3673163c9ce376bf6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Benner <tombenner@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 27 Dec 2014 14:56:21 -0500
Subject: Add a comma after "For example" when appropriate

---
 system/doc/getting_started/conc_prog.xml      | 2 +-
 system/doc/getting_started/records_macros.xml | 2 +-
 system/doc/getting_started/robustness.xml     | 2 +-
 system/doc/getting_started/seq_prog.xml       | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'system/doc')

diff --git a/system/doc/getting_started/conc_prog.xml b/system/doc/getting_started/conc_prog.xml
index 580ba79403..0b7111f183 100644
--- a/system/doc/getting_started/conc_prog.xml
+++ b/system/doc/getting_started/conc_prog.xml
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ pong ! {ping, self()},</code>
       <c>.erlang.cookie</c> in the directory you get to after executing
       the command <c>cd</c> without any argument).
       The <c>.erlang.cookie</c> file should contain one line with
-      the same atom. For example on Linux or Unix in the OS shell:</p>
+      the same atom. For example, on Linux or Unix in the OS shell:</p>
     <pre>
 $ <input>cd</input>
 $ <input>cat > .erlang.cookie</input>
diff --git a/system/doc/getting_started/records_macros.xml b/system/doc/getting_started/records_macros.xml
index 76e3d185fb..2922962134 100644
--- a/system/doc/getting_started/records_macros.xml
+++ b/system/doc/getting_started/records_macros.xml
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ server_transfer(From, Name, To, Message, User_List) ->
       the record is referred to. If you leave out a field when creating
       a record, it will get the value of the atom undefined. (*manual*)</p>
     <p>Pattern matching with records is very similar to creating
-      records. For example inside a <c>case</c> or <c>receive</c>:</p>
+      records. For example, inside a <c>case</c> or <c>receive</c>:</p>
     <code type="none">
 #message_to{to_name=ToName, message=Message} -></code>
     <p>is the same as:</p>
diff --git a/system/doc/getting_started/robustness.xml b/system/doc/getting_started/robustness.xml
index 359ea93275..b97940d388 100644
--- a/system/doc/getting_started/robustness.xml
+++ b/system/doc/getting_started/robustness.xml
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   </header>
   <p>There are several things which are wrong with
     the <seealso marker="conc_prog#ex">messenger example</seealso> from
-    the previous chapter. For example if a node where a user is logged
+    the previous chapter. For example, if a node where a user is logged
     on goes down without doing a log off, the user will remain in
     the server's <c>User_List</c> but the client will disappear thus
     making it impossible for the user to log on again as the server
diff --git a/system/doc/getting_started/seq_prog.xml b/system/doc/getting_started/seq_prog.xml
index 6f35c0cccc..0bd9f83c73 100644
--- a/system/doc/getting_started/seq_prog.xml
+++ b/system/doc/getting_started/seq_prog.xml
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ convert_length({inch, Y}) ->
     <title>Lists</title>
     <p>Whereas tuples group things together, we also want to be able to
       represent lists of things. Lists in Erlang are surrounded by "["
-      and "]". For example a list of the temperatures of various cities
+      and "]". For example, a list of the temperatures of various cities
       in the world could be:</p>
     <code type="none">
 [{moscow, {c, -10}}, {cape_town, {f, 70}}, {stockholm, {c, -4}},
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