From 5446dff69b014565a664d86174539114b94bc99e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Bj=C3=B6rn=20Gustavsson?= <bjorn@erlang.org>
Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 15:35:13 +0100
Subject: Update Installation Guide
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Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik
from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson.
---
 system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml | 24 +++++++++++-------------
 system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml           |  5 +++--
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'system')

diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
index af7dab6e44..ead4b19323 100644
--- a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
+++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
@@ -33,25 +33,23 @@
   </header>
   <section>
     <title>Windows</title>
+    <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable.
+    Get it from http://www.erlang.org/download.html</p>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Introduction</title>
-      <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable.
-        Get it from our <url href="http://www.erlang.org/download.html">download page</url>.</p>
-    </section>
-
-    <section>
-      <title>Installation</title>
-      <p>The installation procedure is is automated. Double-click the
+      <title>Installing</title>
+      <p>The installation procedure is automated. Double-click the
         <c>.exe</c> file icon and follow the instructions.</p>
     </section>
+
     <section>
-    <title>Verification</title>
+    <title>Verifying</title>
     <list type="bulleted">
       <item>
         <p>Start Erlang/OTP by double-clicking on the Erlang shortcut icon on the
           desktop.</p>
-        <p>Expect a command line window to pop up with an output looking something like this:</p>
+        <p>Expect a command-line window to pop up with an output looking
+	something like this:</p>
         <pre>
   Erlang/OTP 17 [erts-6.0] [64-bit] [smp:2:2]
 
@@ -59,12 +57,12 @@
   1></pre>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>,</p>
+        <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>.</p>
         <pre>
   2> <input>halt().</input></pre>
-        <p>which will close the Erlang/OTP shell. </p>
+        <p>This closes the Erlang/OTP shell.</p>
       </item>
     </list>
-  </section>
+    </section>
   </section>
 </chapter>
diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
index 02bf98db7c..96a43d744b 100644
--- a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
+++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
@@ -29,10 +29,11 @@
     <file>part.xml</file>
   </header>
   <description>
-    <p>How to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX or Windows.</p>
+    <marker id="installation guide"></marker>
+    <p>This section describes how to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX and Windows.</p>
   </description>
   <xi:include href="install-binary.xml"/>
   <xi:include href="INSTALL.xml"/>
   <xi:include href="INSTALL-CROSS.xml"/>
   <xi:include href="INSTALL-WIN32.xml"/>
-</part>
\ No newline at end of file
+</part>
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