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authorBjörn Gustavsson <[email protected]>2015-03-12 15:35:13 +0100
committerBjörn Gustavsson <[email protected]>2015-03-12 15:41:04 +0100
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Update Installation Guide
Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson.
-rw-r--r--system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml24
-rw-r--r--system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml5
2 files changed, 14 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
index af7dab6e44..ead4b19323 100644
--- a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
+++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml
@@ -33,25 +33,23 @@
</header>
<section>
<title>Windows</title>
+ <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable.
+ Get it from http://www.erlang.org/download.html</p>
<section>
- <title>Introduction</title>
- <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable.
- Get it from our <url href="http://www.erlang.org/download.html">download page</url>.</p>
- </section>
-
- <section>
- <title>Installation</title>
- <p>The installation procedure is is automated. Double-click the
+ <title>Installing</title>
+ <p>The installation procedure is automated. Double-click the
<c>.exe</c> file icon and follow the instructions.</p>
</section>
+
<section>
- <title>Verification</title>
+ <title>Verifying</title>
<list type="bulleted">
<item>
<p>Start Erlang/OTP by double-clicking on the Erlang shortcut icon on the
desktop.</p>
- <p>Expect a command line window to pop up with an output looking something like this:</p>
+ <p>Expect a command-line window to pop up with an output looking
+ something like this:</p>
<pre>
Erlang/OTP 17 [erts-6.0] [64-bit] [smp:2:2]
@@ -59,12 +57,12 @@
1></pre>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>,</p>
+ <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>.</p>
<pre>
2> <input>halt().</input></pre>
- <p>which will close the Erlang/OTP shell. </p>
+ <p>This closes the Erlang/OTP shell.</p>
</item>
</list>
- </section>
+ </section>
</section>
</chapter>
diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
index 02bf98db7c..96a43d744b 100644
--- a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
+++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml
@@ -29,10 +29,11 @@
<file>part.xml</file>
</header>
<description>
- <p>How to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX or Windows.</p>
+ <marker id="installation guide"></marker>
+ <p>This section describes how to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX and Windows.</p>
</description>
<xi:include href="install-binary.xml"/>
<xi:include href="INSTALL.xml"/>
<xi:include href="INSTALL-CROSS.xml"/>
<xi:include href="INSTALL-WIN32.xml"/>
-</part> \ No newline at end of file
+</part>