Update Embedded Systems User's Guide

Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik
from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson.

3 files changed, 376 insertions, 471 deletions

diff --git a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
index 530e3663e4..2e3b32eb84 100644
--- a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
+++ b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_nt.xml
@@ -31,54 +31,47 @@
     <rev>PA2</rev>
     <file>embedded_nt.xml</file>
   </header>
-  <p>This chapter describes the OS specific parts of OTP which relate
-    to Windows NT.
-    </p>
+  <marker id="windows nt"></marker>
+  <p>This section describes the operating system-specific parts of OTP
+    that relate to Windows NT.</p>
+  <p>A normal installation of Windows NT 4.0, with Service Pack 4 or
+    later, is required for an embedded Windows NT running OTP.</p>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Introduction</title>
-    <p>A normal installation of NT 4.0, with service pack 4 or later, 
-      is required for an embedded Windows NT running OTP.</p>
+    <title>Memory Use</title>
+    <p>RAM memory of 96 MB is recommended to run OTP on Windows NT.
+      A system with less than 64 MB of RAM is not recommended.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Memory Usage</title>
-    <p>RAM memory of 96 MBytes is recommended to run OTP on NT.
-      A system with less than 64 Mbytes of RAM is not recommended.</p>
+    <title>Disk Space Use</title>
+    <p>A minimum Windows NT installation with networking needs 250 MB,
+      and an extra 130 MB for the swap file.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Disk Space Usage</title>
-    <p>A minimum NT installation with networking needs 250 MB, and 
-      an additional 130 MB for the swap file. </p>
-  </section>
-
-  <section>
-    <title>Installation</title>
-    <p>Normal NT installation is performed. No additional application   
-      programs are needed, such as Internet explorer or web server. Networking
-      with TCP/IP is required.      <br></br>
-
-      Service pack 4 or later must be installed.</p>
+    <title>Installing an Embedded System</title>
+    <p>Normal Windows NT installation is performed. No additional
+      application programs are needed, such as Internet Explorer or
+      web server. Networking with TCP/IP is required.</p>
+    <p>Service Pack 4 or later must be installed.</p>
 
     <section>
       <title>Hardware Watchdog</title>
-      <p>For Windows NT running on standard PCs with ISA and/or PCI bus
-        there is a possibility to install an extension card with a hardware
-        watchdog.
-        </p>
-      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> reference manual page in
-        <em>Kernel</em>.
-        </p>
+      <p>For Windows NT running on standard PCs with ISA and/or PCI bus,
+        an extension card with a hardware watchdog can be installed.</p>
+      <p>For more information, see the <c>heart(3)</c> manual page in
+        <c>kernel</c>.</p>
     </section>
   </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Starting Erlang</title>
-    <p>On an embedded system, the <c>erlsrv</c> module should be used, 
-      to install the erlang process as a Windows system service. 
-      This service can start
-      after NT has booted. See documentation for <c>erlsrv</c>.</p>
+    <p>On an embedded system, the <c>erlsrv</c> module is to be used
+      to install the Erlang process as a Windows system service.
+      This service can start after Windows NT has booted.</p>
+    <p>For more information, see the <c>erlsrv</c> manual page
+      in <c>erts</c>.</p>
   </section>
 </chapter>
 
diff --git a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_solaris.xml b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_solaris.xml
index cab3437725..1861436a8e 100644
--- a/system/doc/embedded/embedded_solaris.xml
+++ b/system/doc/embedded/embedded_solaris.xml
@@ -31,125 +31,97 @@
     <rev>B</rev>
     <file>embedded_solaris.xml</file>
   </header>
-  <p>This chapter describes the OS specific parts of OTP which relate
-    to Solaris.
-    </p>
+  <marker id="embedded solaris"></marker>
+
+  <p>This section describes the operating system-specific parts
+  of OTP that relate to Solaris.</p>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Memory Usage</title>
-    <p>Solaris takes about 17 Mbyte of RAM on a system with 64 Mbyte of
-      total RAM. This leaves about 47 Mbyte for the applications. If
-      the system utilizes swapping, these figures cannot be improved
+    <title>Memory Use</title>
+    <p>Solaris takes about 17 MB of RAM on a system with 64 MB of
+      total RAM. This leaves about 47 MB for the applications. If
+      the system uses swapping, these figures cannot be improved
       because unnecessary daemon processes are swapped out. However,
       if swapping is disabled, or if the swap space is of limited
       resource in the system, it becomes necessary to kill off
-      unnecessary daemon processes.
-      </p>
+      unnecessary daemon processes.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Disk Space Usage</title>
+    <title>Disk Space Use</title>
     <p>The disk space required by Solaris can be minimized by using the
-      Core User support installation. It requires about 80 Mbyte of
+      Core User support installation. It requires about 80 MB of
       disk space. This installs only the minimum software required to
-      boot and run Solaris.  The disk space can be further reduced by
+      boot and run Solaris. The disk space can be further reduced by
       deleting unnecessary individual files. However, unless disk
       space is a critical resource the effort required and the risks
-      involved may not be justified.</p>
+      involved cannot be justified.</p>
   </section>
 
   <section>
-    <title>Installation</title>
+    <title>Installing an Embedded System</title>
     <p>This section is about installing an embedded system.
-      The following topics are considered,
-      </p>
+      The following topics are considered:
+    </p>
     <list type="bulleted">
-      <item>
-        <p>Creation of user and installation directory,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Installation of embedded system,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Configuration for automatic start at reboot,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Making a hardware watchdog available,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Changing permission for reboot,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Patches,</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Configuration of the OS_Mon application.</p>
-      </item>
+      <item>Creating user and installation directory</item>
+      <item>Installing an embedded system</item>
+      <item>Configuring automatic start at boot</item>
+      <item>Making a hardware watchdog available</item>
+      <item>Changing permission for reboot</item>
+      <item>Setting TERM environment variable</item>
+      <item>Adding patches</item>
+      <item>Installing module os_sup in application os_mon</item>
     </list>
-    <p>Several of the procedures described below require expert
-      knowledge of the Solaris 2 operating system. For most of them
-      super user privilege is needed.
-      </p>
+    <p>Several of the procedures in this section require expert
+      knowledge of the Solaris operating system. For most of them
+      super user privilege is needed.</p>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Creation of User and Installation Directory</title>
-      <p>It is recommended that the Embedded Environment is run by an
-        ordinary user, i.e. a user who does not have super user
-        privileges.
-        </p>
-      <p>Throughout this section we assume that the user name is
-        <c>otpuser</c>, and that the home directory of that user is,
-        </p>
+      <title>Creating User and Installation Directory</title>
+      <p>It is recommended that the embedded environment is run by an
+        ordinary user, that is, a user who does not have super user
+        privileges.</p>
+      <p>In this section, it is assumed that the username is
+        <c>otpuser</c> and that the home directory of that user is:</p>
       <pre>
         /export/home/otpuser</pre>
-      <p>Furthermore, we assume that in the home directory of
+      <p>It is also assumed that in the home directory of
         <c>otpuser</c>, there is a directory named <c>otp</c>, the
-        full path of which is,
-        </p>
+        full path of which is:</p>
       <pre>
         /export/home/otpuser/otp</pre>
       <p>This directory is the <em>installation directory</em> of the
-        Embedded Environment.
-        </p>
+        embedded environment.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Installation of an Embedded System</title>
-      <p>The procedure for installation of an embedded system does
-        not differ from that of an ordinary system (see the
-        <em>Installation Guide</em>),
-        except for the following:
-        </p>
+      <title>Installing an Embedded System</title>
+      <p>The procedure for installing an embedded system
+        is the same as for an ordinary system (see
+	Installation Guide), except for the following:</p>
       <list type="bulleted">
-        <item>
-          <p>the (compressed) tape archive file should be
-            extracted in the installation directory as defined above,
-            and,</p>
-        </item>
-        <item>
-          <p>there is no need to link the start script to a
-            standard directory like <c>/usr/local/bin</c>.</p>
-        </item>
+        <item>The (compressed) tape archive file is to be extracted in
+	the installation directory defined above.</item>
+        <item>It is not needed to link the start script to a standard
+	directory like <c>/usr/local/bin</c>.</item>
       </list>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Configuration for Automatic Start at Boot</title>
-      <p>A true embedded system has to start when the system
-        boots. This section accounts for the necessary configurations
-        needed to achieve that.
-        </p>
-      <p>The embedded system and all the applications will start
-        automatically if the script file shown below is added to the
-        <c>/etc/rc3.d</c> directory.  The file must be owned and
-        readable by <c>root</c>, and its name cannot be arbitrarily
-        assigned. The following name is recommended,
-        </p>
+      <title>Configuring Automatic Start at Boot</title>
+      <p>A true embedded system must start when the system boots.
+        This section accounts for the necessary configurations
+        needed to achieve that.</p>
+      <p>The embedded system and all the applications start
+        automatically if the script file shown below is added to
+        directory <c>/etc/rc3.d</c>. The file must be owned and
+        readable by <c>root</c>. Its name cannot be arbitrarily
+        assigned; the following name is recommended:</p>
       <pre>
         S75otp.system</pre>
-      <p>For further details on initialization (and termination)
-        scripts, and naming thereof, see the Solaris documentation.
-        </p>
+      <p>For more details on initialization (and termination)
+        scripts, and naming thereof, see the Solaris documentation.</p>
       <pre>
 #!/bin/sh
 #  
@@ -187,386 +159,333 @@ case "$1" in
         echo "Usage: $0 { start | stop }"
         ;;
 esac</pre>
-      <p>The file <c>/export/home/otpuser/otp/bin/start</c> referred to
-        in the above script, is precisely the script <c>start</c>
-        described in the section <em>Starting Erlang</em> below. The
+      <p>File <c>/export/home/otpuser/otp/bin/start</c> referred to
+        in the above script is precisely the <c>start</c> script
+        described in <em>Starting Erlang</em>. The
         script variable <c>OTP_ROOT</c> in that <c>start</c> script
-        corresponds to the example path
-        </p>
+        corresponds to the following example path used in this
+	section:</p>
       <pre>
         /export/home/otpuser/otp</pre>
-      <p>used in this section. The <c>start</c> script should be edited
-        accordingly.
-        </p>
-      <p>Use of the <c>killproc</c> procedure in the above script could
-        be combined with a call to <c>erl_call</c>, e.g.
-        </p>
+      <p>The <c>start</c> script is to be edited accordingly.</p>
+      <p>Use of the <c>killproc</c> procedure in the above script can
+        be combined with a call to <c>erl_call</c>, for example:</p>
       <pre>
         $SOME_PATH/erl_call -n Node init stop</pre>
-      <p>In order to take Erlang down gracefully see the
-        <c>erl_call(1)</c> reference manual page for further details
-        on the use of <c>erl_call</c>.  That however requires that
-        Erlang runs as a distributed node which is not always the
-        case.
-        </p>
-      <p>The <c>killproc</c> procedure should not be removed: the
+      <p>To take Erlang down gracefully, see the <c>erl_call(1)</c>
+        manual page in <c>erl_interface</c> for details on the use
+	of <c>erl_call</c>. However,
+	that requires that Erlang runs as a distributed node, which is
+        not always the case.</p>
+      <p>The <c>killproc</c> procedure is not to be removed. The
         purpose is here to move from run level 3 (multi-user mode with
         networking resources) to run level 2 (multi-user mode without
-        such resources), in which Erlang should not run.
-        </p>
+        such resources), in which Erlang is not to run.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Hardware Watchdog</title>
+      <title>Making Hardware Watchdog Available</title>
       <p>For Solaris running on VME boards from Force Computers,
-        there is a possibility to activate the onboard hardware
-        watchdog, provided a VME bus driver is added to the operating
-        system (see also <em>Installation Problems</em> below).
-        </p>
-      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> reference manual page in
-        <em>Kernel</em>.
-        </p>
+        the onboard hardware watchdog can be activated,
+	provided a VME bus driver is added to the operating system
+        (see also Installation Problems).</p>
+      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> manual page in <c>kernel</c>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <title>Changing Permissions for Reboot</title>
       <p>If the <c>HEART_COMMAND</c> environment variable is to be set
-        in the <c>start</c> script in the section, <em>Starting Erlang</em>, and if the value shall be set to the
-        path of the Solaris <c>reboot</c> command, i.e.
-        </p>
+        in the <c>start</c> script in
+	<em>Starting Erlang</em>, and if the value is to be set to the
+        path of the Solaris <c>reboot</c> command, that is:</p>
       <pre>
         HEART_COMMAND=/usr/sbin/reboot</pre>
-      <p>the ownership and file permissions for <c>/usr/sbin/reboot</c>
-        must be changed as follows,
-        </p>
+      <p>then the ownership and file permissions for
+      <c>/usr/sbin/reboot</c> must be changed as follows:</p>
       <pre>
         chown 0 /usr/sbin/reboot
         chmod 4755 /usr/sbin/reboot</pre>
-      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> reference manual page in
-        <em>Kernel</em>.
-        </p>
+      <p>See also the <c>heart(3)</c> manual page in <c>kernel</c>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>The TERM Environment Variable</title>
-      <p>When the Erlang runtime system is automatically started from the
-        <c>S75otp.system</c> script the <c>TERM</c> environment
-        variable has to be set. The following is a minimal setting,
-        </p>
+      <title>Setting TERM Environment Variable</title>
+      <p>When the Erlang runtime system is automatically started from
+        the <c>S75otp.system</c> script, the <c>TERM</c> environment
+        variable must be set. The following is a minimal setting:</p>
       <pre>
         TERM=sun</pre>
-      <p>which should be added to the <c>start</c> script described in
-        the section.
-        </p>
+      <p>This is to be added to the <c>start</c> script.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Patches</title>
+      <title>Adding Patches</title>
       <p>For proper functioning of flushing file system data to disk on
-        Solaris 2.5.1, the version specific patch with number
-        103640-02 must be added to the operating system. There may be
-        other patches needed, see the release README file
-        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/README]]></c>.
-        </p>
+        Solaris 2.5.1, the version-specific patch with number
+        103640-02 must be added to the operating system. Other
+	patches might be needed, see the release README file
+        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/README]]></c>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Installation of Module os_sup in Application OS_Mon</title>
+      <title>Installing Module os_sup in Application os_mon</title>
       <p>The following four installation procedures require super user
-        privilege.
-        </p>
-
-      <section>
-        <title>Installation</title>
-        <list type="ordered">
-          <item>
-            <p><em>Make a copy the Solaris standard configuration file for syslogd.</em></p>
-            <list type="bulleted">
-              <item>
-                <p>Make a copy the Solaris standard configuration
-                  file for syslogd.  This file is usually named
-                  <c>syslog.conf</c> and found in the <c>/etc</c>
-                  directory.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>The file name of the copy must be
-                  <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> but the directory location
-                  is optional. Usually it is <c>/etc</c>.
-                  </p>
-                <p>A simple way to do this is to issue the command</p>
-                <code type="none">
+        privilege:</p>
+
+	<section>
+	  <title>Installation</title>
+	  <list type="bulleted">
+	    <item><em>Make a copy of the Solaris standard configuration
+	    file for <c>syslogd</c>:</em>
+	    <list type="bulleted">
+	      <item>Make a copy of the Solaris standard configuration
+	      file for <c>syslogd</c>. This file is usually named
+	      <c>syslog.conf</c> and found in directory <c>/etc</c>.</item>
+              <item>The filename of the copy must be <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c>.
+	      The directory location is optional; usually it is <c>/etc</c>.
+	      A simple way to do this is to issue the following command:
+	      <code type="none">
 cp /etc/syslog.conf /etc/syslog.conf.ORIG</code>
               </item>
-            </list>
-          </item>
-          <item>
-            <p><em>Make an Erlang specific configuration file for syslogd.</em></p>
-            <list type="bulleted">
-              <item>
-                <p>Make an edited copy of the back-up copy previously
-                  made.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>The file name must be <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> and the
-                  path must be the same as the back-up copy.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>The format of the configuration file is found in the
-                  man page for <c>syslog.conf(5)</c>, by issuing the
-                  command <c>man syslog.conf</c>.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>Usually a line is added which should state:</p>
-                <list type="bulleted">
-                  <item>
-                    <p>which types of information that will be
-                      supervised by Erlang,</p>
-                  </item>
-                  <item>
-                    <p>the name of the file (actually a named pipe)
-                      that should receive the information.</p>
-                  </item>
-                </list>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>If e.g. only information originating from the
-                  unix-kernel should be supervised, the line should
-                  begin with <c>kern.LEVEL</c> (for the possible
-                  values of <c>LEVEL</c> see <c>syslog.conf(5)</c>).</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>After at least one tab-character, the line added
-                  should contain the full name of the named pipe where
-                  syslogd writes its information. The path must be the
-                  same as for the <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> and
-                  <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> files. The file name must be
-                  <c>syslog.otp</c>.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>If the directory for the <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> and
-                  <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> files is <c>/etc</c> the line
-                  in <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> will look like:</p>
-                <code type="none">
+	    </list>
+	    </item>
+	    <item><em>Make an Erlang-specific configuration file for
+	    <c>syslogd</c>:</em>
+	    <list type="bulleted">
+	      <item>Make an edited copy of the backup copy previously
+	      made.</item>
+              <item>The filename must be <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c>. The
+	      path must be the same as the backup copy.</item>
+              <item>The format of the configuration file is found in the
+	      <c>syslog.conf(5)</c> manual page, by issuing the command
+	      <c>man syslog.conf</c>.</item>
+              <item>Usually a line is added that is to state:
+	      <list type="bulleted">
+		<item>Which types of information that is to be
+		supervised by Erlang</item>
+		<item>The name of the file (actually a named pipe) that
+		is to receive the information</item>
+	      </list>
+	      </item>
+	      <item>If, for example, only information originating from
+	      the UNIX kernel is to be supervised, the line is to
+	      begin with <c>kern.LEVEL</c>. For the possible
+	      values of <c>LEVEL</c>, see <c>syslog.conf(5)</c>.</item>
+	      <item>After at least one tab-character, the line added is to
+	      contain the full name of the named pipe where <c>syslogd</c>
+	      writes its information. The path must be the same as for the
+	      files <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> and <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c>.
+	      The filename must be <c>syslog.otp</c>.</item>
+	      <item>If the directory for the files <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c>
+	      and <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> is <c>/etc</c>, the line in
+	      <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> is as follows:
+	      <code type="none">
 kern.LEVEL                /etc/syslog.otp</code>
-              </item>
-            </list>
-          </item>
-          <item>
-            <p><em>Check the file privileges of the configuration files.</em></p>
-            <list type="bulleted">
-              <item>
-                <p>The configuration files should have <c>rw-r--r--</c>
-                  file privileges and be owned by root.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>A simple way to do this is to issue the commands</p>
-                <code type="none">
+	      </item>
+	    </list>
+	    </item>
+	    <item><em>Check the file privileges of the configuration
+	    files:</em>
+	    <list type="bulleted">
+	      <item>The configuration files is to have <c>rw-r--r--</c>
+	      file privileges and be owned by root.</item>
+              <item>A simple way to do this is to issue these commands:
+	      <code type="none">
 chmod 644 /etc/syslog.conf
 chmod 644 /etc/syslog.conf.ORIG
 chmod 644 /etc/syslog.conf.OTP</code>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p><em>Note:</em> If the <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> and
-                  <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> files are not in the
-                  <c>/etc</c> directory, the file path in the second
-                  and third command must be modified.</p>
-              </item>
-            </list>
-          </item>
-          <item>
-            <p><em>Modify file privileges and ownership of the mod_syslog utility.</em></p>
-            <list type="bulleted">
-              <item>
-                <p>The file privileges and ownership of the
-                  <c>mod_syslog</c> utility must be modified.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>The full name of the binary executable file is
-                  derived from the position of the <c>os_mon</c>
-                  application if the file system by adding
-                  <c>/priv/bin/mod_syslog</c>. The generic full name
-                  of the binary executable file is thus</p>
-                <code type="none"><![CDATA[
+	      </item>
+              <item>Notice that if the files <c>syslog.conf.ORIG</c> and
+	      <c>syslog.conf.OTP</c> are not in directory <c>/etc</c>,
+	      the file path in the second and third command must be
+	      modified.</item>
+	    </list>
+	    </item>
+	    <item><em>Modify file privileges and ownership of the
+	    <c>mod_syslog</c> utility:</em>
+	    <list type="bulleted">
+	      <item>The file privileges and ownership of the
+	      <c>mod_syslog</c> utility must be modified.</item>
+              <item><p>The full name of the binary executable file is
+	      derived from the position of application <c>os_mon</c>
+	      in the file system by adding
+	      <c>/priv/bin/mod_syslog</c>. The generic full name
+	      of the binary executable file is thus:</p>
+	      <code type="none"><![CDATA[
 <OTP_ROOT>/lib/os_mon-<REV>/priv/bin/mod_syslog]]></code>
-                <p><em>Example:</em> If the path to the otp-root is
-                  <c>/usr/otp</c>, thus the path to the <c>os_mon</c>
-                  application is <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0</c>
-                  (assuming revision 1.0) and the full name of the
-                  binary executable file is
-                  <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0/priv/bin/mod_syslog</c>.</p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>The binary executable file must be owned by root,
-                  have <c>rwsr-xr-x</c> file privileges, in particular
-                  the setuid bit of user must be set.
-                  </p>
-              </item>
-              <item>
-                <p>A simple way to do this is to issue the commands</p>
-                <code type="none"><![CDATA[
+	      <p><em>Example:</em> If the path to <c>otp-root</c> is
+	      <c>/usr/otp</c>, then the path to the <c>os_mon</c>
+	      application is <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0</c>
+	      (assuming revision 1.0) and the full name of the
+	      binary executable file is
+	      <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0/priv/bin/mod_syslog</c>.</p>
+	      </item>
+	      <item>The binary executable file must be owned by root,
+	      have <c>rwsr-xr-x</c> file privileges, in particular
+	      the <c>setuid</c> bit of the user must be set.</item>
+              <item><p>A simple way to do this is to issue the following
+	      commands:</p>
+	      <code type="none"><![CDATA[
 cd <OTP_ROOT>/lib/os_mon-<REV>/priv/bin/mod_syslog
 chmod 4755 mod_syslog
 chown root mod_syslog]]></code>
-              </item>
-            </list>
-          </item>
-        </list>
-      </section>
-
-      <section>
-        <title>Testing the Application Configuration File</title>
-        <p>The following procedure does not require root privilege.
-          </p>
-        <list type="bulleted">
-          <item>
-            <p>Ensure that the configuration parameters for the
-              <c>os_sup</c> module in the <c>os_mon</c> application
-              are correct.</p>
-          </item>
-          <item>
-            <p>Browse the application configuration file (do
-              <em>not</em> edit it). The full name of the application
-              configuration file is derived from the position of the
-              OS_Mon application if the file system by adding
-              <c>/ebin/os_mon.app</c>.
-              </p>
-            <p>The generic full name of the file is thus</p>
-            <code type="none"><![CDATA[
+	    </item>
+	  </list>
+	</item>
+      </list>
+    </section>
+
+    <section>
+      <title>Testing the Application Configuration File</title>
+      <p>The following procedure does not require root privilege:</p>
+      <list type="bulleted">
+	<item>Ensure that the configuration parameters for the
+	<c>os_sup</c> module in the <c>os_mon</c> application
+	are correct.</item>
+	<item><p>Browse the application configuration file (do
+	<em>not</em> edit it). The full name of the application
+	configuration file is derived from the position of the
+	<c>os_mon</c> application in the file system by adding
+	<c>/ebin/os_mon.app</c>.</p>
+	<p>The generic full name of the file is thus:</p>
+	<code type="none"><![CDATA[
 <OTP_ROOT>/lib/os_mon-<REV>/ebin/os_mon.app.]]></code>
-            <p><em>Example:</em> If the path to the otp-root is
-              <c>/usr/otp</c>, thus the path to the <c>os_mon</c>
-              application is <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0 </c> (assuming
-              revision 1.0) and the full name of the binary executable
-              file is <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0/ebin/os_mon.app</c>.</p>
-          </item>
-          <item>
-            <p>Ensure that the following configuration parameters are
-              bound to the correct values.</p>
-          </item>
+	<p><em>Example:</em> If the path to <c>otp-root</c> is
+	<c>/usr/otp</c>, then the path to the <c>os_mon</c> application
+	is <c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0 </c> (assuming revision 1.0) and
+	the full name of the binary executable file is
+	<c>/usr/otp/lib/os_mon-1.0/ebin/os_mon.app</c>.</p>
+	</item>
+	<item>Ensure that the following configuration parameters have
+	correct values:</item>
         </list>
-        <table>
+
+	<table>
           <row>
             <cell align="left" valign="top"><em>Parameter</em></cell>
             <cell align="left" valign="top"><em>Function</em></cell>
             <cell align="left" valign="top"><em>Standard value</em></cell>
           </row>
           <row>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">start_os_sup</cell>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">Specifies if os_sup will be started or not.</cell>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>true</c>for the first instance on the hardware; <c>false</c>for the other instances.</cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>start_os_sup</c></cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle">Specifies if <c>os_sup</c>
+	    is to be started or not.</cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>true</c> for the
+	    first instance on the hardware; <c>false</c> for the
+	    other instances</cell>
           </row>
           <row>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">os_sup_own</cell>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The directory for (1)the back-up copy, (2) the Erlang specific configuration file for syslogd.</cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>os_sup_own</c></cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The directory for
+	    (1) back-up copy and (2) Erlang-specific configuration
+	    file for <c>syslogd</c></cell>
             <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>"/etc"</c></cell>
           </row>
           <row>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">os_sup_syslogconf</cell>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The full name for the  Solaris standard configuration file for syslogd </cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>os_sup_syslogconf</c></cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The full name for the
+	    Solaris standard configuration file for <c>syslogd</c></cell>
             <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>"/etc/syslog.conf"</c></cell>
           </row>
           <row>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">error_tag</cell>
-            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The tag for the messages that are sent to the error  logger in the Erlang runtime system.</cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>error_tag</c></cell>
+            <cell align="left" valign="middle">The tag for the
+	    messages that are sent to the error logger in the Erlang
+	    runtime system</cell>
             <cell align="left" valign="middle"><c>std_error</c></cell>
           </row>
           <tcaption>Configuration Parameters</tcaption>
         </table>
-        <p>If the values listed in the <c>os_mon.app</c> do not suit
-          your needs, you should <c>not</c> edit that file. Instead
-          you should <em>override</em> values in a <em>system configuration file</em>, the full pathname of which is given
-          on the command line to <c>erl</c>.
-          </p>
-        <p><em>Example:</em> The following is an example of the
-          contents of an application configuration file.</p>
-        <p></p>
-        <pre>
+
+        <p>If the values listed in <c>os_mon.app</c> do not suit
+          your needs, do <em>not</em> edit that file. Instead
+          <em>override</em> the values in a <em>system configuration
+	  file</em>, the full pathname of which is given
+          on the command line to <c>erl</c>.</p>
+        <p><em>Example:</em> Contents of an application configuration
+	  file:</p>
+	  <pre>
           [{os_mon, [{start_os_sup, true}, {os_sup_own, "/etc"}, 
           {os_sup_syslogconf, "/etc/syslog.conf"}, {os_sup_errortag, std_error}]}].</pre>
-      </section>
-
-      <section>
-        <title>Related Documents</title>
-        <p>See also the <c>os_mon(3)</c>, <c>application(3)</c> and
-          <c>erl(1)</c> reference manual pages.</p>
-      </section>
     </section>
 
     <section>
-      <title>Installation Problems</title>
-      <p>The hardware watchdog timer which is controlled by the
-        <c>heart</c> port program requires the <c>FORCEvme</c>
-        package, which contains the VME bus driver, to be
-        installed. This driver, however, may clash with the Sun
-        <c>mcp</c> driver and cause the system to completely refuse to
-        boot. To cure this problem, the following lines should be
-        added to <c>/etc/system</c>:
-        </p>
+      <title>Related Documents</title>
+      <p>See the <c>os_mon(3)</c> application,
+      the <c>application(3)</c> manual page in <c>kernel</c>,
+      and the <c>erl(1)</c> manual page in <c>erts</c>.</p>
+    </section>
+  </section>
+
+  <section>
+    <title>Installation Problems</title>
+      <p>The hardware watchdog timer, which is controlled by the
+        <c>heart</c> port program, requires package <c>FORCEvme</c>,
+        which contains the VME bus driver, to be
+        installed. However, this driver can clash with the Sun
+        <c>mcp</c> driver and cause the system to refuse to
+        boot. To cure this problem, the following lines are
+	to be added to <c>/etc/system</c>:</p>
       <list type="bulleted">
         <item><c>exclude: drv/mcp</c></item>
         <item><c>exclude: drv/mcpzsa</c></item>
         <item><c>exclude: drv/mcpp</c></item>
       </list>
       <warning>
-        <p>It is recommended that these lines be added to avoid the
-          clash described, which may make it completely impossible to
-          boot the system.</p>
+        <p>It is recommended to add these lines to avoid a clash.
+	The clash can make it impossible to boot the system.</p>
       </warning>
     </section>
   </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Starting Erlang</title>
-    <p>This section describes how an embedded system is started.  There
-      are four programs involved, and they all normally reside in the
-      directory <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/bin]]></c>.  The only exception is
-      the program <c>start</c>, which may be located anywhere, and
-      also is the only program that must be modified by the user.
-      </p>
-    <p>In an embedded system there usually is no interactive shell.
-      However, it is possible for an operator to attach to the Erlang
-      system by giving the command <c>to_erl</c>.  He is then
-      connected to the Erlang shell, and may give ordinary Erlang
-      commands.  All interaction with the system through this shell is
-      logged in a special directory.
-      </p>
-    <p>Basically, the procedure is as follows.  The program
-      <c>start</c> is called when the machine is started.  It calls
-      <c>run_erl</c>, which sets things up so the operator can attach
-      to the system.  It calls <c>start_erl</c> which calls the
-      correct version of <c>erlexec</c> (which is located in
-      <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/erts-EVsn/bin]]></c>) with the correct
-      <c>boot</c> and <c>config</c> files.
-      </p>
+    <p>This section describes how an embedded system is started. Four
+      programs are involved and they normally reside in the directory
+      <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/bin]]></c>. The only exception is
+      the <c>start</c> program, which can be located anywhere, and
+      is also the only program that must be modified by the user.</p>
+    <p>In an embedded system, there is usually no interactive shell.
+      However, an operator can attach to the Erlang
+      system by command <c>to_erl</c>. The operator is then
+      connected to the Erlang shell and can give ordinary Erlang
+      commands. All interaction with the system through this shell is
+      logged in a special directory.</p>
+    <p>Basically, the procedure is as follows:</p>
+    <list type="bulleted">
+      <item>The <c>start</c> program is called when the machine
+      is started.</item>
+      <item>It calls <c>run_erl</c>, which sets up things so the
+      operator can attach to the system.</item>
+      <item>It calls <c>start_erl</c>, which calls the correct
+      version of <c>erlexec</c> (which is located in
+      <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/erts-EVsn/bin]]></c>) with the
+      correct <c>boot</c> and <c>config</c> files.</item>
+    </list>
   </section>
 
   <section>
     <title>Programs</title>
-
     <section>
       <title>start</title>
-      <p>This program is called when the machine is started.  It may
-        be modified or re-written to suit a special system.  By
+      <p>This program is called when the machine is started. It can
+        be modified or rewritten to suit a special system. By
         default, it must be called <c>start</c> and reside in
-        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/bin]]></c>.  Another start program can be
-        used, by using the configuration parameter <c>start_prg</c> in
-        the application <c>sasl</c>.</p>
+        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/bin]]></c>. Another start
+	program can be used, by using configuration parameter
+	<c>start_prg</c> in application <c>sasl</c>.</p>
       <p>The start program must call <c>run_erl</c> as shown below.
-        It must also take an optional parameter which defaults to
-        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/releases/start_erl.data]]></c>.
-        </p>
-      <p>This program should set static parameters and environment
+        It must also take an optional parameter, which defaults to
+        <c><![CDATA[<ERL_INSTALL_DIR>/releases/start_erl.data]]></c>.</p>
+      <p>This program is to set static parameters and environment
         variables such as <c>-sname Name</c> and <c>HEART_COMMAND</c>
-        to reboot the machine.
-        </p>
-      <p>The <c><![CDATA[<RELDIR>]]></c> directory is where new release packets
-        are installed, and where the release handler keeps information
-        about releases.  See <c>release_handler(3)</c> in the
-        application <c>sasl</c> for further information.
-        </p>
+        to reboot the machine.</p>
+      <p>The <c><![CDATA[<RELDIR>]]></c> directory is where new release
+        packets are installed, and where the release handler keeps
+	information about releases. For more information, see the
+	<c>release_handler(3)</c> manual page in <c>sasl</c>.</p>
       <p>The following script illustrates the default behaviour of the
-        program.
-        </p>
+        program:</p>
       <code type="none"><![CDATA[
 #!/bin/sh
 # Usage: start [DataFile]
@@ -583,10 +502,9 @@ START_ERL_DATA=${1:-$RELDIR/start_erl.data}
 $ROOTDIR/bin/run_erl /tmp/ $ROOTDIR/log "exec $ROOTDIR/bin/start_erl \ 
                      $ROOTDIR $RELDIR $START_ERL_DATA" > /dev/null 2>&1 &]]></code>
       <p>The following script illustrates a modification where the node
-        is given the name <c>cp1</c>, and the environment variables
+        is given the name <c>cp1</c>, and where the environment variables
         <c>HEART_COMMAND</c> and <c>TERM</c> have been added to the
-        above script.
-        </p>
+        previous script:</p>
       <code type="none"><![CDATA[
 #!/bin/sh
 # Usage: start [DataFile]
@@ -606,11 +524,10 @@ START_ERL_DATA=${1:-$RELDIR/start_erl.data}
 
 $ROOTDIR/bin/run_erl /tmp/ $ROOTDIR/log "exec $ROOTDIR/bin/start_erl \ 
       $ROOTDIR $RELDIR $START_ERL_DATA -heart -sname cp1" > /dev/null 2>&1 &]]></code>
-      <p>If a diskless and/or read-only client node is about to start the
-        <c>start_erl.data</c> file is located in the client directory at
-        the master node. Thus, the <c>START_ERL_DATA</c> line should look
-        like:
-        </p>
+      <p>If a diskless and/or read-only client node is about to start,
+        file <c>start_erl.data</c> is located in the client directory at
+        the master node. Thus, the <c>START_ERL_DATA</c> line is to look
+        like:</p>
       <code type="none">
 CLIENTDIR=$ROOTDIR/clients/clientname
 START_ERL_DATA=${1:-$CLIENTDIR/bin/start_erl.data}</code>
@@ -620,22 +537,24 @@ START_ERL_DATA=${1:-$CLIENTDIR/bin/start_erl.data}</code>
       <title>run_erl</title>
       <p>This program is used to start the emulator, but you will not
         be connected to the shell. <c>to_erl</c> is used to connect to
-        the Erlang shell.
-        </p>
+        the Erlang shell.</p>
       <code type="none">
 Usage: run_erl pipe_dir/ log_dir "exec command [parameters ...]"</code>
-      <p>Where <c>pipe_dir/</c> should be <c>/tmp/</c> (<c>to_erl</c>
-        uses this name by default) and <c>log_dir</c> is where the log
-        files are written.  <c>command [parameters]</c> is executed,
-        and everything written to stdin and stdout is logged in the
-        <c>log_dir</c>.
-        </p>
-      <p>In the <c>log_dir</c>, log files are written.  Each logfile
-        has a name of the form: <c>erlang.log.N</c> where N is a
-        generation number, ranging from 1 to 5. Each logfile holds up
-        to 100kB text. As time goes by the following logfiles will be
-        found in the logfile directory</p>
-      <code type="none">
+<p>Here:</p>
+     <list type="bulleted">
+       <item><c>pipe_dir/</c> is to be <c>/tmp/</c> (<c>to_erl</c>
+       uses this name by default).</item>
+       <item><c>log_dir</c> is where the log files are written.</item>
+       <item><c>command [parameters]</c> is executed.</item>
+       <item>Everything written to <c>stdin</c> and <c>stdout</c>
+       is logged in <c>log_dir</c>.</item>
+     </list>
+     <p>Log files are written in <c>log_dir</c>. Each log file
+       has a name of the form <c>erlang.log.N</c>, where N is a
+       generation number, ranging from 1 to 5. Each log file holds up
+       to 100 kB text. As time goes by, the following log files are
+       found in the log file directory:</p>
+       <code type="none">
 erlang.log.1
 erlang.log.1, erlang.log.2
 erlang.log.1, erlang.log.2, erlang.log.3
@@ -643,48 +562,40 @@ erlang.log.1, erlang.log.2, erlang.log.3, erlang.log.4
 erlang.log.2, erlang.log.3, erlang.log.4, erlang.log.5
 erlang.log.3, erlang.log.4, erlang.log.5, erlang.log.1
 ...</code>
-      <p>with the most recent logfile being the right most in each row
-        of the above list. That is, the most recent file is the one
-        with the highest number, or if there are already four files,
-        the one before the skip.
-        </p>
-      <p>When a logfile is opened (for appending or created) a time
-        stamp is written to the file.  If nothing has been written to
+      <p>The most recent log file is the rightmost in each row. That
+      is, the most recent file is the one with the highest number, or
+      if there are already four files, the one before the skip.</p>
+      <p>When a log file is opened (for appending or created), a time
+        stamp is written to the file. If nothing has been written to
         the log files for 15 minutes, a record is inserted that says
-        that we're still alive.
-        </p>
+        that we are still alive.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <title>to_erl</title>
       <p>This program is used to attach to a running Erlang runtime
-        system, started with <c>run_erl</c>.
-        </p>
+        system, started with <c>run_erl</c>.</p>
       <code type="none">
 Usage: to_erl [pipe_name | pipe_dir]</code>
-      <p>Where <c>pipe_name</c> defaults to <c>/tmp/erlang.pipe.N</c>.
-        </p>
+      <p>Here <c>pipe_name</c> defaults to <c>/tmp/erlang.pipe.N</c>.</p>
       <p>To disconnect from the shell without exiting the Erlang
-        system, type <c>Ctrl-D</c>.
-        </p>
+        system, type <c>Ctrl-D</c>.</p>
     </section>
 
     <section>
       <title>start_erl</title>
       <p>This program starts the Erlang emulator with parameters
-        <c>-boot</c> and <c>-config</c> set.  It reads data about
-        where these files are located from a file called
-        <c>start_erl.data</c> which is located in the <c><![CDATA[<RELDIR>]]></c>.
-        Each new release introduces a new data file.  This file is
-        automatically generated by the release handler in Erlang.
-        </p>
-      <p>The following script illustrates the behaviour of the
-        program.
-        </p>
+        <c>-boot</c> and <c>-config</c> set. It reads data about
+        where these files are located from a file named
+        <c>start_erl.data</c>, which is located in
+	<c><![CDATA[<RELDIR>]]></c>.
+        Each new release introduces a new data file. This file is
+        automatically generated by the release handler in Erlang.</p>
+      <p>The following script illustrates the behaviour of the program:</p>
       <code type="none">
 #!/bin/sh
 #
-# This program is called by run_erl.  It starts
+# This program is called by run_erl. It starts
 # the Erlang emulator and sets -boot and -config parameters.
 # It should only be used at an embedded target system.
 #
@@ -710,22 +621,23 @@ export PROGNAME
 export RELDIR
 
 exec $BINDIR/erlexec -boot $RELDIR/$VSN/start -config $RELDIR/$VSN/sys $*</code>
+
       <p>If a diskless and/or read-only client node with the
         <c>sasl</c> configuration parameter <c>static_emulator</c> set
-        to <c>true</c> is about to start the <c>-boot</c> and
-        <c>-config</c> flags must be changed. As such a client cannot
-        read a new <c>start_erl.data</c> file (the file is not
-        possible to change dynamically) the boot and config files are
+        to <c>true</c> is about to start, the <c>-boot</c> and
+        <c>-config</c> flags must be changed.</p>
+	<p>As such a client cannot
+        read a new <c>start_erl.data</c> file (the file cannot
+        be changed dynamically). The boot and config files are
         always fetched from the same place (but with new contents if
-        a new release has been installed). The <c>release_handler</c>
-        copies this files to the <c>bin</c> directory in the client
+        a new release has been installed).</p>
+	<p>The <c>release_handler</c>
+        copies these files to the <c>bin</c> directory in the client
         directory at the master nodes whenever a new release is made
-        permanent.
-        </p>
-      <p>Assuming the same <c>CLIENTDIR</c> as above the last line
-        should look like:
-        </p>
-      <code type="none">
+        permanent.</p>
+	<p>Assuming the same <c>CLIENTDIR</c> as above, the last line
+        is to look like:</p>
+	<code type="none">
 exec $BINDIR/erlexec -boot $CLIENTDIR/bin/start \ 
      -config $CLIENTDIR/bin/sys $*</code>
     </section>
diff --git a/system/doc/embedded/part.xml b/system/doc/embedded/part.xml
index e4366bd2c2..f3b44bf494 100644
--- a/system/doc/embedded/part.xml
+++ b/system/doc/embedded/part.xml
@@ -31,17 +31,17 @@
     <rev>C</rev>
     <file></file>
   </header>
+
   <description>
-    <p>This manual describes the issues that are specific
+    <marker id="embedded systems user guide"></marker>
+    <p>This section describes the issues that are specific
       for running Erlang on an embedded system.
       It describes the differences in installing and starting
-      Erlang compared to how it is done for a non-embedded system.
-      </p>
-    <p>Note that this is a supplementary document. You still need to
-      read the Installation Guide.
-      </p>
-    <p>There is also target architecture specific information in
-      the top level README file of the Erlang distribution.</p>
+      Erlang compared to how it is done for a non-embedded system.</p>
+      <note><p>This is a supplementary section. You also need to
+      read Section 1 Installation Guide.</p></note>
+    <p>There is also target architecture-specific information in
+      the top-level README file of the Erlang distribution.</p>
   </description>
   <xi:include href="embedded_solaris.xml"/>
   <xi:include href="embedded_nt.xml"/>