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@@ -83,12 +83,12 @@ for free, including a small handbook about MongoDB. All
 people had to do was show up.</p></div>

 <div class="paragraph"><p>They didn’t go tell people to look at all the weaknesses

 their product had. They focused on the strengths. On

-what would convince people to try it. People would go

-to meetups, discuss with people, commit to try it (or

+what would convince people to try it. They would go

+to meetups, discuss with others, commit to try it (or

 try it at meetups directly), and by doing so sell MongoDB

 to themselves.</p></div>

 <div class="paragraph"><p>How do we get people to meetups though? That’d be the

-first step: you need to <strong>catch people’s attention</strong>.

+first step: you need to <strong>catch their attention</strong>.

 I believe MongoDB did this using benchmark results.

 Ironic isn’t it? MongoDB gets fast benchmark results

 because they lose data, and this gets everyone to buy