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| author | Björn Gustavsson <[email protected]> | 2015-03-12 15:35:13 +0100 |
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| committer | Björn Gustavsson <[email protected]> | 2015-03-12 15:41:04 +0100 |
| commit | 5446dff69b014565a664d86174539114b94bc99e (patch) | |
| tree | 95782010346844c0d2da4f0cd6f14beb21a3703e /system | |
| parent | 82dd592d078c473c93ba5cded74f9d71dc504e30 (diff) | |
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Update Installation Guide
Language cleaned up by the technical writers xsipewe and tmanevik
from Combitech. Proofreading and corrections by Björn Gustavsson.
Diffstat (limited to 'system')
| -rw-r--r-- | system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml | 24 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml | 5 |
2 files changed, 14 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml index af7dab6e44..ead4b19323 100644 --- a/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml +++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/install-binary.xml @@ -33,25 +33,23 @@ </header> <section> <title>Windows</title> + <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable. + Get it from http://www.erlang.org/download.html</p> <section> - <title>Introduction</title> - <p>The system is delivered as a Windows Installer executable. - Get it from our <url href="http://www.erlang.org/download.html">download page</url>.</p> - </section> - - <section> - <title>Installation</title> - <p>The installation procedure is is automated. Double-click the + <title>Installing</title> + <p>The installation procedure is automated. Double-click the <c>.exe</c> file icon and follow the instructions.</p> </section> + <section> - <title>Verification</title> + <title>Verifying</title> <list type="bulleted"> <item> <p>Start Erlang/OTP by double-clicking on the Erlang shortcut icon on the desktop.</p> - <p>Expect a command line window to pop up with an output looking something like this:</p> + <p>Expect a command-line window to pop up with an output looking + something like this:</p> <pre> Erlang/OTP 17 [erts-6.0] [64-bit] [smp:2:2] @@ -59,12 +57,12 @@ 1></pre> </item> <item> - <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>,</p> + <p>Exit by entering the command <c>halt()</c>.</p> <pre> 2> <input>halt().</input></pre> - <p>which will close the Erlang/OTP shell. </p> + <p>This closes the Erlang/OTP shell.</p> </item> </list> - </section> + </section> </section> </chapter> diff --git a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml index 02bf98db7c..96a43d744b 100644 --- a/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml +++ b/system/doc/installation_guide/part.xml @@ -29,10 +29,11 @@ <file>part.xml</file> </header> <description> - <p>How to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX or Windows.</p> + <marker id="installation guide"></marker> + <p>This section describes how to install Erlang/OTP on UNIX and Windows.</p> </description> <xi:include href="install-binary.xml"/> <xi:include href="INSTALL.xml"/> <xi:include href="INSTALL-CROSS.xml"/> <xi:include href="INSTALL-WIN32.xml"/> -</part>
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