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authorLoïc Hoguin <[email protected]>2017-03-26 12:55:10 +0200
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@@ -83,12 +83,12 @@ for free, including a small handbook about MongoDB. All
people had to do was show up.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
&lt;div class=&#34;paragraph&#34;&gt;&lt;p&gt;They didn&amp;#8217;t go tell people to look at all the weaknesses
their product had. They focused on the strengths. On
-what would convince people to try it. People would go
-to meetups, discuss with people, commit to try it (or
+what would convince people to try it. They would go
+to meetups, discuss with others, commit to try it (or
try it at meetups directly), and by doing so sell MongoDB
to themselves.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/div&gt;
&lt;div class=&#34;paragraph&#34;&gt;&lt;p&gt;How do we get people to meetups though? That&amp;#8217;d be the
-first step: you need to &lt;strong&gt;catch people&amp;#8217;s attention&lt;/strong&gt;.
+first step: you need to &lt;strong&gt;catch their attention&lt;/strong&gt;.
I believe MongoDB did this using benchmark results.
Ironic isn&amp;#8217;t it? MongoDB gets fast benchmark results
because they lose data, and this gets everyone to buy
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@@ -144,12 +144,12 @@ for free, including a small handbook about MongoDB. All
people had to do was show up.</p></div>
<div class="paragraph"><p>They didn&#8217;t go tell people to look at all the weaknesses
their product had. They focused on the strengths. On
-what would convince people to try it. People would go
-to meetups, discuss with people, commit to try it (or
+what would convince people to try it. They would go
+to meetups, discuss with others, commit to try it (or
try it at meetups directly), and by doing so sell MongoDB
to themselves.</p></div>
<div class="paragraph"><p>How do we get people to meetups though? That&#8217;d be the
-first step: you need to <strong>catch people&#8217;s attention</strong>.
+first step: you need to <strong>catch their attention</strong>.
I believe MongoDB did this using benchmark results.
Ironic isn&#8217;t it? MongoDB gets fast benchmark results
because they lose data, and this gets everyone to buy